I like the way you build up the desperation, its masterfully well done but the toilet part feels a bit too short.
Great writing, I wish you'd share more of your works
Reviews For Seras's Lesson in How Much to Drink
Thank you I will look through and try to find the spelling mistakes. And I will definitely change the name.
Date: Dec 30, 2014 04:41 pm [Report This]
Seems promising, but the blocks of text make it hard to keep track of where you are, and the many spelling errors ("I'm HERE", not "hear", amongst others) need some fixing. Also, it's "integra", not "Integral"
Date: Dec 29, 2014 10:44 pm [Report This]