You should write professionally.
HBO's writers would be (disgustingly or arousingly) impressed.
Cersei Reviewer: DrBones Signed
You said in your notes you wanted this to be accessible to everyone, so as someone who knows nothing about the books or shows, I can say it is. I do get that they center on people in power, and those close to them, constantly plotting against everyone else to get more power, and this story captures that atmosphere. The references to the religion and politics make you feel like you're in a fully developed world.
One nice thing is that it starts the desperation action right away to keep you interested through the exposition. It also doesn’t bombard the reader with tons of character names you have to remember to follow what's going on. You have the evil queen, the old guys, and the noble servant girl with the big butt. Simple.
I did guess what was going to happen to the letters fairly early on.
As usual, I love your poetic descriptions; just over the top enough to be funny but still appropriate to the setting.
Cersei Reviewer: JWPoop Signed
Absolutely the best I've read in a long time. I love the interaction between the two women. The queen's diarrea jaxdisposed against the servent-girls difficult production is just wonderful! Please write more!!
You've made Cersei actually likable, and dare say, "attractive?"
That is a minor miracle!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Hopefully she's not too likeable!
Awesome work Blue
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it!