Quick and to the point, which is nice. But it does need work. It feels like it could use more build-up and tension as the desperation comes into play, maybe with some near accidents during a few fights. Also, it would help to give the description of Aurora a bit earlier, or at least fix it so there's more detail about her body and the suit she's in so it's not just a brief quip about her looks.
Author's Response: Thank you Orpheum, I shall endeavor to remedy that in later chapters