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Title: Don't mess with Taco Tuesday Reviewer: Jimmy Olsen Signed
Finally an Equestria Girls story on Nyou Fiction! I'm glad you chose clean, proper Ms. Rarity for the girl taking a messy, smelly dump. I like the funny dialog and love the descriptions. "Her bowels felt like they were a raging thunderstorm overlooking a roaring inferno. She could feel a hot, sticky mass threatening to spill into her pristine panties." Wonderful!

On the negative side, the story is pretty rushed. I'd rather read about the conflict with Sonata rather than just getting a brief summary. The Rarity-Pinkie shipping at the end seems sudden and random.

Author's Response: I understand Jimmy, and thanks for the heads up. I might make a prequel story at some point. 
Date: Feb 08, 2016 06:57 am [Report This]
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