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Binding Desperation by Duce Rated: X+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Ruki has a plan to have some fun with Juri.
Categories: Digimon Tamers Characters: Jeri Katou, Rika Nonaka
Warnings: Desperation, Loli, Defecation, Yuri
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5364 Read Count: 1913
Published: Sep 08, 2007 Updated: Sep 08, 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Binding Desperation Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Very nicely done, I like how the toilet scenes went and even the slight Yuri isn't too bad.



Author's Response: Thanks, and man this is a late response lol.
Date: Sep 09, 2007
Aelita by Anime Lover Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Chapter three of Orpheum's and Poowrites Code: LYOKO fic
Categories: Story Contest III, Code Lyoko Characters: Aelita, Jeremie Belpois
Warnings: Loli (High School), Pantypoop
Series: Aelita\'s Joy
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1600 Read Count: 2043
Published: Sep 08, 2007 Updated: Sep 08, 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Very nice, and certainly a good continuation of my story.

I actually thought of a better name for this, Aelita's secret, you can use it if you want.

Date: Sep 10, 2007
Summary:

Katara and the gang are trapped in a dungeon. Katara needs to poop and decides to use the bucket in their cell.

 That'd be totally hot.

My Entry for contest #2
Categories: Story Contest II, Avatar: The Last Airbender Characters: Katara
Warnings: Desperation, Defecation
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1787 Read Count: 3707
Published: Sep 08, 2007 Updated: Sep 08, 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Very nicely done, I really like how Sokka does the swoop of the arms, that's so like him to dramatize EVERY single thing :P



Author's Response: Yeah, I liked writing Sokka. I think I got his personality down pretty well here.\r\n\r\nThanks for the review (again) and I\\\'m glad you enjoyed it.
Date: Sep 09, 2007
Summary: Just like the title says.
Categories: Avatar: The Last Airbender Characters: Ty Lee
Warnings: Desperation, Pantypoop
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1169 Read Count: 2634
Published: Sep 08, 2007 Updated: Sep 08, 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed
As always I'm glad you tried you're hand at the challenge I laid out and you did flawlessly on this. Poor Ty Lee, hehehe, maybe she'll get even with Mai somehow...

Author's Response: How could I pass up the chance to have Ty Lee pooping her pants? Still, I\\\'m glad you liked this one.\r\n\r\nTy Lee doesn\\\'t seem like the type to get back at someone, so I don\\\'t know if I\\\'ll ever do something like that. I\\\'ve already decided my next Avatar fic will feature Azula having an accident. Maybe I\\\'ll squeeze Mai in there too.
Date: Sep 09, 2007
Roshi's Deal by Poowrite Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: What I would have asked Bulma to do in exchange for her dragon ball.
Categories: Dragon Ball Characters: Bulma
Warnings: Pantypoop
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1216 Read Count: 1497
Published: Sep 08, 2007 Updated: Sep 08, 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed
Always loved this one, a truly gem. Maybe you can another where she shits the bunny suit so Roshi blows out the Ox King's castle to stop the fire.

Author's Response: I like this one, too. Roshi is one of my favorite DBZ characters and I can actually see him doing something like this. I know I would.\r\n\r\nI\\\'ve though about doing a bunny-suit sequel. Actually, I was even going to have it in the same situation you suggested (Ox King, fire ...). I thought I\\\'d set it up where Bulma had to accept the laxatives to get things moving. Anyway, I\\\'ve obiviously put some thought into it. I just haven\\\'t done any writing :).
Date: Sep 09, 2007
Summary: Phoenix gets some unexpected help during a tough trial from everyone's favorite magical ghost-spirit-hot chick-lawyer...thing. But when the host body she's in has to go, things start to get...messy.
Categories: Ace Attorney Characters: Mia Fey, Pearl Fey, Phoenix Wright
Warnings: Pantypoop
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1693 Read Count: 1797
Published: Sep 10, 2007 Updated: Sep 10, 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

This will always be a favorite of mine. Great big poo and even better in small panties! ^__^

 

ERECTION!

 

X__X *Is once again killed for making that joke*

Date: Dec 04, 2007
Summary:

Takes place during the game where Ashley is trapped in a room on the island and has to pee but her captures wont let her leave.

Note: has nothing to do with OrpheumZero's RE4 fic


Categories: Resident Evil Characters: Ashley Graham
Warnings: Desperation, Wetting
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1160 Read Count: 861
Published: Sep 10, 2007 Updated: Sep 10, 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

A nice story as always, while I'm a bit more for scat, this is still very well done. And my RE stories even go hand in hand in a way.

Keep up the good work! :)

Date: Sep 10, 2007
Summary: Etna tries to take advantage of Flonne's kindness, but the dense Angel makes a mistake that may cost Etna a pair of panties!
Categories: Disgaea Characters: Etna
Warnings: Desperation, Pantypoop
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1458 Read Count: 1414
Published: Sep 10, 2007 Updated: Sep 10, 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

I sure hope you do use Etna again, given the nature of the games, it'd be simple to do a story with her doing a mega ultra dump. :P

Am I right or am I right? ;)

But still an excellent story.

Date: Sep 10, 2007
Scat Fight by Anime Lover Rated: X starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Two opponents enter, they both leave, one with a messy backside ^_^

The rule? fight your opponent until they crap themselves
Categories: Original Characters: None
Warnings: Defecation, Desperation, Loli, Loli (High School), Pantypoop, Scat, Voyeur, Yuri
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9452 Read Count: 3789
Published: Sep 10, 2007 Updated: Apr 21, 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Round 3: The Semi-Final Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Pretty good, though not quite as good as the first two.

I guess we'll finally see something about the host in the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Why don't you think it's not quite as good as the previous two?

becouse their poo was liquified?

And yes, the mystery girl will finally be revealed in the last chapter ^_^ 

Date: Apr 17, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Round 2 Amy vs. Chloe Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Not bad, while the concept is a bit odd, it's pretty nice for a fetish fic nonetheless. And I can see you're hinting at some deeper plot as Amy apperantly knew the girl over the intercom.

 

Keep up the great work.



Author's Response: hehe, it's not that much of a plot, but as I'm sure you've guessed, the owner of the mystery voice will be revealed ^_^
Date: Apr 12, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: Round 4: The Main Event Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Pretty good. I would say there could have been more backstory like off handed comments about the princess and greater foreshadowing, but still very good nonetheless.

I'm wondering, will there a sequel of some kind?



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it ^_^

While I did the series, I did concider doing a 'Pee Fight' sequel.

I may still do it, but it'll be awhile if I do 

Date: Apr 22, 2008
Summary: My entry for the first contest.
Categories: Story Contest I, Dragon Ball Z Characters: Videl
Warnings: Desperation, Defecation
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2766 Read Count: 1512
Published: Sep 11, 2007 Updated: Sep 11, 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed
Felt like reviewing this one again. It's still very good and funny. Though I did notice a potential for even funnier scenes. You had Gohan practically grope Videl's ass to keep her from pooping more, but yet she doesn't even seem to mind it one bit. I don't know about you, but that would have been a pricless moment to either have her freak out from being molested like that, or maybe have Gohan forget what he was doing with his hands :P
Date: Aug 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed
You should definately do another story with Videl pooping sometime. Maybe one where she's training and she 'concentrates too hard', if you know what I mean ;)
Date: Sep 25, 2009
Summary: Entry for Contest III.
Categories: Code Lyoko, Story Contest III Characters: Aelita
Warnings: Desperation, Pantypoop, Wetting
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1881 Read Count: 2211
Published: Sep 11, 2007 Updated: Sep 11, 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

A wonderful continuation to a great story (Yes I'm being bragging :P) and a nice blend of accident/purposeful messing.

Hopefully you'll do another one sometime, but I'd say it would best to wait until I do my sequel. That way we don't mess up someone else's established plot.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review.\r\n\r\nI don\\\'t expect I\\\'ll be doing another Lyoko fic anytime soon, so I wouldn\\\'t worry about me messing up the plot.\r\n\r\nThanks for the review.
Date: Sep 12, 2007
Summary: my first VORE series

Shinobu's already yummy looking, but what happens when she REALLY becomes yummy?
Categories: Love Hina Characters: Amalla Su, Kanako Urashima, Kaolla Su, Mei Narusegawa, Mitsune "Kitsune" Konno, Shinobu Maehara
Warnings: Loli, Defecation, Vore, Urination, Yuri
Series: The Love Hina Stories
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5887 Read Count: 1453
Published: Sep 16, 2007 Updated: Sep 16, 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed
This one has always been weird. Technically I'm not into vore, as the idea is just bizarre, but you handled it in this in a way that isn't too disturbing or disgusting *obviously ignoring the fact that the girl was pooping baked good, XP*
Date: Nov 06, 2009
Summary: A record of certain events that took place in and around a Hunter Class gunship belonging to one Samus Aran.
Categories: Metroid Characters: Samus Aran
Warnings: Desperation, Pantypoop
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 656 Read Count: 2153
Published: Sep 18, 2007 Updated: Sep 18, 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Nicely done! I liked how you made it feel like the scanner logs from the games. Though I you might want to try some more sophisticated words to make it sound more techincal like, but it's not that big a deal.

Very great and well done, a great new take on this genre of stories. :)

Maybe someone else will give this a shot, I'd love to see what other might attempt with this style.

Date: Sep 18, 2007
Summary: Street Fighters Karin and Sakura decide to have some fun in the woman's restroom at a major fighting competition.

Warnings: Heavy scat eating, farting, etc. If you don't like scat you won't like this.
Categories: Street Fighter Characters: Sakura Kasugano
Warnings: Scat
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2978 Read Count: 1574
Published: Sep 21, 2007 Updated: Sep 21, 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Karin & Sakura: Toilet Sluts Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed
Straight forward scat isn't my cup of tea, but this isn't half bad. But I would advise you clean up alot of the odd typos and symbols.
Date: Sep 22, 2007
Summary: As the gang search for Dhoulmagus, Jessica fights an increasing urge to take a dump.
Categories: Dragon Quest VIII Characters: Angelo, Hero (8), Jessica Albert, King Trode, Princess Medea, Yangus
Warnings: Desperation, Defecation
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3855 Read Count: 1382
Published: Sep 23, 2007 Updated: Sep 23, 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Jessica\'s Concoction Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Excellent, very well done. There needs to be more Jessica stories!

While the tensing is a bit grating, it's not that bad, and hopefully you'll avoid that problem next time.

Date: Sep 24, 2007
Summary: Awaiting to be tortured in the morning, the feces within Jessica demand to be freed before then.
Categories: Dragon Quest VIII Characters: Angelo, Hero (8), Jessica Albert, King Trode, Yangus
Warnings: Desperation, Humiliation, Defecation, Voyeur, Urination
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2265 Read Count: 908
Published: Sep 23, 2007 Updated: Sep 23, 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Redhead, the Prison Cell, and the Bucket Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

It's pretty cool how you made this in the same vain as my Resident Evil story (multiple versions), and quite well done in presenting two outcomes.

Maybe a third outcome where our fiery spellcaster has an accident me thinks? ;)

Date: Sep 24, 2007
Summary: New to the outside world, Noa deals with her natural bodily functions.....naturally.
Categories: Legend of Legaia Characters: Gala, Noa, Vahn
Warnings: Desperation, Loli (High School), Defecation, Voyeur, Urination
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2762 Read Count: 971
Published: Sep 25, 2007 Updated: Sep 25, 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Pooping in Legaia Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Once more, had to re-review this story too.

You should do a sequel, Noa seems too care-free to really pay attention to 'lady-like' mannerisms all the time ;)

Date: Jul 21, 2008
Summary: The second part of The Coxsackie Saga. The gang decides to check out strange Dragon Ball like readings on a planet located near Sandoro, but may be for more than they bargined for.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Dragon Ball GT Characters: Pan
Warnings: Defecation, Desperation, Farting, Humiliation, Pantypoop, Urination, Wetting
Series: The Coxsackie Saga
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6966 Read Count: 3958
Published: Oct 08, 2007 Updated: Oct 08, 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Crash! Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed
Odd, could have sworn I had reviewed this. Anyway, I'm still waiting for the next part! I want to see what happens. I do think though, that Videl 'lacking arm strength' is absurd. I mean... she could probably leave Gohan a bloody mess if she wanted you know :P

Author's Response: Even after all this time, I still get good words on these stories. Man, I really need to get back to them. Thanks for the review!
Date: Nov 06, 2009
Summary: Toph occupies the bathroom and forces Katara to tough it out
Categories: Avatar: The Last Airbender, Story Contest IV Characters: Katara, Toph Bei Fong
Warnings: Desperation, Loli (High School), Masturbation, Urination, Voyeur, Wetting, WS
Challenges: Avatar Challenge
Series: Avatar: Back and Forth
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1266 Read Count: 2258
Published: Oct 15, 2007 Updated: Oct 15, 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Very nice, it didn't stray too far from the real show (somehow I wouldn't put 'that' past Toph :P) And it was pretty cool with the implied pooping (I think my bending poop comment from way back has created a trend XP).

Good luck with this, can't wait to see more stories in the contest.



Author's Response: Thanks, It occurred to me that there was a month time period of no story, so I figured it would be a perfect time frame to do a fic on ^_^
Date: Oct 16, 2007
Summary: Past Featured Story

Two girls. Two superhuman talents. One full bladder. One stuck elevator.


Categories: Original, Story Contest IV Characters: None
Warnings: Desperation, Humiliation, Loli, Urination
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6516 Read Count: 1136
Published: Oct 18, 2007 Updated: Oct 18, 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Not half bad, not half bad at all. An interesting concept, while nothing earth-shatteringly original. Still it does well in presenting an off-shoot of the usual loli anime style.

Personally I think it'd worked to have had the girls reconcile at that moment, possibly with Tau realizing how low she had fallen and Zeta having an epiphony, thus changing her ways. Not only would it break the cliched save the redeemption for a sequel angle, but also offer more potential for other relations.

Nonetheless, a very good story that is most certainly worthy competition.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you mostly liked it.  I was imagining a much more negative reaction to this story. 

By "redemption" do you mean "retribution?"  If that's the case, then I can understand where you're coming from.  It's just a matter of having different visions of the story.  It could just as easily have ended either way.

If this is sequelized, I see it as a series comprised of an entertaining petty feud between the 2 girls and maybe their friends, ultimately ending in some kind of reconciliation.  That being said, I have no plans for writing any more stories in this universe, since I just invented it for this contest.  Anyone is free to use the characters and universe if they want to (with a couple minor rules).

Date: Oct 18, 2007
Captured by Anime Lover Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: After a surprise attack by Azula, Toph finds herself aboard a Fire Nation ship, alone with Azula and her two friends...

Contains violence
Categories: Avatar: The Last Airbender Characters: Azula, Toph Bei Fong, Ty Lee
Warnings: Bondage, Loli, Urination
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2517 Read Count: 1276
Published: Oct 20, 2007 Updated: Oct 20, 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

This was pretty good. A little too extreme for such a young character, but I guess that's to be expected of what is technically a loli fic.

I kinda think the pee part should've been longer, like she dribbles then Azula plays with her to make her piss more.

 

Overall a pretty good story, not quite my cup of tea, but still a bit more bearable than most of those really brutal rape stories.



Author's Response: Thanks, the pee part was pretty much added on an whim, And i figured, if someone\\\'s electrocuted, it doesn\\\'t matter how good your control is, if there\\\'s pee in you, it\\\'s coming out weather you want it to of not :p\r\n\r\nAbout the extremity, I wanted to try and keep it between almost too far and yet not graphic enough to be hard to read, especially with such an awesome character.\r\n\r\nI like doing fics with really mean/sadistic characters too though and Azula\\\'s perfect ^_^
Date: Oct 20, 2007