Again, weird-ass grammar and very short. You need an intoduction that builds up excitement and a better ending.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the advice.I will try to improve my stories from now on.
Reviews For Sasha's gigantic dump (Attack on Titan)
Date: Sep 05, 2016 02:51 pm [Report This]
Attack on titanfall is coming out.
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