Although some descriptions and story telling could use some rewriting. I say it is not a bad read. Your stories are improving, and it is quite nice to see such hyperscat story, as I love hyperscat.

I think toning down on the description is nessecary though. 100 meter of log would be enough to fill up a stall basically. 1~3 meter would be enough to show how massive the girl's shit is. (Maybe 10~20m if it is hyper)

Don't be discouraged to write man. Writing always improves the more you write. And the speed at you are writing is astounding.

I can already see you getting better.

Hope to see more from you!