Like MyndBlown said, your grammar and spelling have both improved a lot! So good job in that regard. But I'm also gonna have to agree with him on the repetitive point; it kinda feels like these are all the same story over and over with a slightly different coat of paint. Obviously write to what you enjoy and if you like this style more power to you, but variety would be nice in my opinion.
Author's Response: the stories for skyrim mostly revolve around the characters, such as the laxative prank with the rich elf, a spouse trying to comfort another in pain, or a friend helping another friend out, i will admit that most of the stories were a kinda similar except the 4th story that was based on WS, my apologies for not making it more diverse then i wanted it to be, ill try to be a bit more observant next time, thanks for reading
Reviews For Skyrim: Call of Nature II
Date: Dec 18, 2016 12:52 pm [Report This]
Ahrk fin Kel lost prodah, do ved viing ko fin krah
Tol fod zeymah win kein meyz fundein!
Alduin, feyn do jun, kruziik vokun staadnau
Voth aan bahlok wah diivon fin lein
Author's Response: ... so did you liked it or...
Tol fod zeymah win kein meyz fundein!
Alduin, feyn do jun, kruziik vokun staadnau
Voth aan bahlok wah diivon fin lein
Author's Response: ... so did you liked it or...
Date: Dec 17, 2016 09:09 pm [Report This]
Grammar and spelling have improved by about 1000x times. Still a few mistakes here and there. It's pretty repetitive.
Date: Dec 16, 2016 03:08 pm [Report This]