It's actually an ok show, think Winx, except it doesn't suck eggs. The show revolves around the 5 girls becoming 'Guardians of the Veil' and accuiring their powers after being given the Heart of Kandrakar (which belongs to the world that makes the center of existence). The first season they fight against Phobos who is an evil prince who took over his world of Meridian (only the princess is allowed to rule) while his little sister was still an infant.

As for their powers, Will at first has none, except for creating small attacks from the Heart, but eventually gains Quintessence (or Electricity). Irma controls water, and can make it out of thin air (from the beginning in show, but not until later in the comics). Taranee has power over fire, Cornelia can move earth and anything with earthen qualities (like algie from a  pool) and Hay Lin controls air (even though some point her Chinese origins would not count air as an element).

All in all it's a good show, not too girly despite the fact it centers on female protaganists and still good with the action. If you're curious about the show, you can probably find some videos on Youtube.

Good to know you liked it. And I'm glad that it did fit in well enough like an episode (like our Code Lyoko stories :D).

Well I'm sure you'll probably make your own story for the series too sometime. Though I do have plans to follow this one up, since I'm sure you all know what I had Hay Lin hinting towards at the end ;)

*Head slowly swelling to titanic proportions from egomania* Thank you, it's nice to see people liking the story so well. I do think I did pretty well in having it fit into the season without stepping on the toes of the continuity. And I did what I could to match the respective characteristics of the girls, Irma's wisecracks as you can plainly see :D

Thanks for the review and I await what you have in store as well. ;)

*A hand holding a bobby pin appears and pops my head*

I apprieciate the review, and understand that a lack of knowledge to the show can make things seem hard to understand. I had the same trouble with Poowrite's Avatar stories since I didn't start watching the show until about a year ago or roughly so.

The show appears on Jetix, the Toonami rip-off for Toon Disney. But the show only comes on at 3 in the morning (at least in my time zone). But I'm sure you could probably find the episodes on Youtube, granted if you have a fast enough connection to watch 3 nine minute parts.

Personally I think the narrative was ok, but not my best. I do think I did well with the descriptions to Heatherfield and Meridian, but that's just me :P

Thanks once more for the review.