A very interesting switch seeing Toph helpless, humiliated, and crying. Once in a while it's refreshing to see a character put in a totally opposite postion then he or she is normally. As for Azula, i thought that this scenerio wasn;t far off (from what I see, she has no qualms about using such methods). Although I did cringe at the mention of bloody anal rape (I like anal sex but only when it's consenusal and if the girl finds at least some pleasure in it), your story did bring out my means streak and for the most part I enjoyed it. I thought the peeing was a bit rushed, though the electricity idea was very good. The ending seemed a bit hurried as well, but apart from that and a few grammar errors, it was a good fic. I'm eager to see what you come up with next.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading.rnrnI admit, the ending was rushed, I didn\'t want the fic to end with Toph still captured, I didn\'t want if being that kind of fic, I actually had plans on Toph \'returning\' the favor to Azula and get some earth up her butt, but I didn\'t get around to it.