Wow... That was certainly different. I was NOT aware that MS Word could be used that way, hehe.
Other than the normal grammar errors, though, I can find very little wrong with this fic, though I, too, am not really a fan of blood, nor anal, nor of the "ahem" background.
The idea, though, of Su inventing that certainly seems plausible, and, since I know there's a pic that's done in the same style, I'd look forward to seeing a fic on that, though, of course, I'd probably want Su's fantasy to be something to do with WS, lol.
Great job as always, AL.
FallenStar