About time..... I was wondering if I had to use that favor from Boba Fett to get you to write this chapter.... Just kidding :P
But still very good, an interesting touch with the yuri element, there aren't terribly many of these kind of stories, at least with the pooping element added.
Now a bit of fair criticism. I do think Rikku's whole seduction of Yuna kinda seems a bit sudden. One moments she's just enjoying her 'ritual' and the next she's snogging a girl whose supposed to be her first cousin. Also, I think maybe Yuna might have gotten a bit overjoyed for someone on her first purposeful accident, but then again I could be mistaken.
Overall, a great addition to an already good short story. Kudos.
Author's Response: I agree that Rikku's seduction and Yuna's enthusiasm seemed very sudden and perhaps I should've handled it with a bit more subtlety. However I had the idea from the very beggining to make this story charge headlong into that strong sexuality. And as far as them being cousins go I think I'll quote 4chan "Incest? Seems more like wincest, amirite guys?!"