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Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: HaloAnime Signed
Finish IT!
Date: Jan 03, 2011 05:53 pm [Report This]
Title: Old and new friends Reviewer: HaloAnime Signed
Finish it please!
Date: Nov 26, 2010 09:50 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: azqsxw Signed
i love these stories please write more chapters im dying to find out what happens next!!
Date: Sep 24, 2008 03:16 pm [Report This]
Title: Old and new friends Reviewer: devimo89 Signed
NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: Jul 27, 2008 05:34 pm [Report This]
Title: Old and new friends Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
I thought it was pretty good. Short and plagued here and there with grammer errors but over all a good story.

Thanks for sharing!
Date: Jul 20, 2008 11:06 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Nice, another fine chapter.

Though I have to wonder, I could have sworn the Chozo were a kind and fair race. While I've only been able to play the first two Prime games from beginning to end, I recall they were good and just.

Date: Jul 20, 2008 09:34 pm [Report This]
Title: Old and new friends Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Good effort. The grammatical errors are noticible, but nothing terribly hurtful to the eyes.

Despite a little lightness to the story, it's still a nice good little read.

Date: May 22, 2008 12:29 am [Report This]
Title: Old and new friends Reviewer: Teesle Anonymous

I don't really know if I should post answers in the review section of my own story, but I think I just do it now, if I souldn't please tell and I'll make an extra Thread or whatever .

Thanks for the comments about my english, you really lifted some weight off of my shoulders there.

Toasty : No I don't think I'll get as "creepy" as LivingInfinite, but some of his work inspired me, so be sure that wasn't the last time she cried, but it will happen out of different emotions, then just embarrasment.

Thanks again for the kind words, I really appreciate them

Date: May 21, 2008 05:42 pm [Report This]
Title: Old and new friends Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
Indeed, your English was just fine and the story was great. Like Toasty, I'm left wondering what's going to happen next.

Here's hoping you do more, I'd like to read it!
Date: May 21, 2008 01:26 pm [Report This]
Title: Old and new friends Reviewer: Toasty Signed
Wow, I'm impressed. The different viewpoints and dream sequence do well at building suspense; in fact, this is one of the few toilet fics I'm looking forward to the next chapter of simply because of the story. While I understand that humiliation will probably feature prominently in this story, I really hope you stay away from the type of domination shown in LivingInfinite's drawings. They really creep me out!

Regardless, it seems like you are a good writer. Also, like Omni said, your English is better than many internet users who call themselves native speakers(no one on this site, of course), so you really shouldn't worry about it.
Date: May 21, 2008 01:07 pm [Report This]
Title: Old and new friends Reviewer: Omnipresent Signed
Well done, very imaginative concept.  I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.  Your english, by the way, is just fine so don't worry about it.
Date: May 21, 2008 12:08 pm [Report This]
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