I've never watched Total Drama Island, but, I may check it out one day. However, I did a quick check of the characters to see who was who on the Total Drama Wiki, and I say Heather wasn't a bad choice for this. It's a good Fic, keep up the good work.

I'm glad I weighted for the episode this is based on to air in America before reviewing it as it makes a lot more sense now. The massive chain pucking thing for example (that I'm not really into myself) would have seemed a little extreme compared to most of the stuff here. Now I see how much it ties into the episode and the show in general. It dose fit in with this story being a piece of footage shot for the "show within a show" that couldn't be aired. I think they they could have gotten away with putting something like this in that episode. I would sure have enjoyed it more.

Your descriptions where very good as I could imagine the characters in the action and voicing the lines, (though it could just be that I've seen every episode about six times now...)

I would say you got the characters down pretty well. Wile some people may have preferred not to think about Chef's "reaction", it dose go with his character as someone who gets off on seeing people humiliated as opposed to Chris who enjoys it more for humor. I think the losers where a little hard on Cody because he didn't write the dare specifically for Gwen, or even a girl for that matter (though I'm sure he didn't mind the way it came out.)

My favorite part was near the end with Gwen in the confession outhouse with her pants down still having the runnes. Classic TDI humor and a wonderful mental picture.

Author's Response:

I was aware that the episode that I based this story on wasn't shown in America until now, so that's why I added the minor spoiler notice, just to make sure sure people didn't get confused about it.

As I was aware, the confession cam wasn't designed to be used as an actual toilet. I think the only actual incidents where people used it as a toilet was when Lindsay was peeing in there while reading a magazine, and one more incident on the final show that I won't describe due to it being a major spoiler in the plot.

Very, very nice! Vomit has always been one of my favorite themes by far, but sadly very few stories involve it, and the majority of the ones that do, completely dance around the subject. Good to finally see a story that included it!

Author's Response:

I think vomiting isn't that much of a popular theme with stories here, since the majority of stories here involve urination/defecation.

I added the vomiting parts because quite a bit of it actually occurred on that episode, but I didn't expect someone to be that into it. And I'm sure glad that you liked it.

Nice one. Good description, nice theme, but, in my opinion, one of the other girls would have been a more... attractive... option to choose.

Author's Response:

Well, I tried to keep the characters accurate to the episode that this story was based on. A few things (Heather's TP dancing dare, for example) were made up for this story, but most of the things in it are references to actual things that happened on the show.

I may think about writing a story that has nothing to do with the series, assuming that's what you're talking about.

I've never seen the show, personally. But I liked the story. Laxative use and the results thereof is one of my favorite themes.

Good work.