Reviews For Orihime: A week in the life of a panty pooper
So far a great story. Love the actual keeping to character personalities(unlike a lot of fictions) and making it really seem like something Orihime would do. Loving it.
Date: Nov 29, 2019 08:45 pm [Report This]
Will this be updated anytime soon?
Date: Jul 31, 2014 05:21 pm [Report This]
Really good story again. I really like these stories where the girl seems to go in her pants on purpose.
Date: Jun 05, 2010 01:31 pm [Report This]
Another great story. Please keep posting!
Date: Jun 05, 2010 01:22 pm [Report This]
funny and cute
Date: Sep 07, 2009 08:31 pm [Report This]
funny and cute
Date: Sep 07, 2009 08:29 pm [Report This]
Woah, that's quite a good story. Nice to see a new one from you, your stories never disappoint and this one was no different.
Orihime's causal indifference to her accidents is endearing. Her and Tatsuki'interactions are believable and add a lot to the story.
In all good work, here's hoping we see another one from you soon :D.
Orihime's causal indifference to her accidents is endearing. Her and Tatsuki'interactions are believable and add a lot to the story.
In all good work, here's hoping we see another one from you soon :D.
Date: Mar 28, 2009 04:24 pm [Report This]
This is a good chapter, much better than the first, and it leaves me eager to read what comes next. In the first chapter Orihime is the more sympathetic one while Tatsuki comes across as overly critical, but here I found myself siding with Tatsuki.
You describe Orihime's messing very well, and her wetting extremely well. I was worried you would gloss over the peeing in this story in favor of the pooping, since that often happen in stories including both. But what you don't describe is either of Tatsuki's dumps. I would have liked to have felt like I was in there with her while she was going.
One last comment: the peanut butter and jelly teriyaki swordfish made me laugh out loud.
Author's Response: I had a feeling a lot of people would have liked me to go into more detail about Tatsuki in the bathroom but honestly I have no interest in it. I tend to only write about what I enjoy reading about so I only describe accidents, sorry if this is disappointing for some.
You describe Orihime's messing very well, and her wetting extremely well. I was worried you would gloss over the peeing in this story in favor of the pooping, since that often happen in stories including both. But what you don't describe is either of Tatsuki's dumps. I would have liked to have felt like I was in there with her while she was going.
One last comment: the peanut butter and jelly teriyaki swordfish made me laugh out loud.
Author's Response: I had a feeling a lot of people would have liked me to go into more detail about Tatsuki in the bathroom but honestly I have no interest in it. I tend to only write about what I enjoy reading about so I only describe accidents, sorry if this is disappointing for some.
Date: Mar 25, 2009 11:25 pm [Report This]
*Sitting in a lawn chair, wizened and covered in cobwebs*
Eh?... Oh... about time... How long have I been waiting... is that you, Billy?!
:P Anyway, glad to see the next chapter. I've been waiting to see this for ages. I can see we'll probably have a bit of a 'battle' with the ladies over whose right in this little issue.
A few spelling errors, but nothing major. Though I would have liked it if we could have seen what Tatsuki had to do, but oh well, maybe next time? Keep up the great work!
Date: Mar 23, 2009 11:14 pm [Report This]
been a while are u still going to do the story?
Date: Feb 03, 2009 04:27 pm [Report This]
nice chapter looking forward to the next when do you think you will get it out, cant wait to much more.
Date: Dec 24, 2008 02:03 am [Report This]
Good work, I thought the characters reacted pretty damn close to their anime counter-parts. It was a bit short, but over all pretty good.
Looking forward to part 2.
Looking forward to part 2.
Date: Dec 01, 2008 07:24 pm [Report This]
A great read Mister, it really gives me the urge to write my own stuff again.
Maybe you could add some diapers to this, it would be fitting ; D
Author's Response: Just be patient and I think you'll be pleasantly surprised.
Maybe you could add some diapers to this, it would be fitting ; D
Author's Response: Just be patient and I think you'll be pleasantly surprised.
Date: Nov 25, 2008 07:47 pm [Report This]
Nice to see you making another story. I was starting to wonder if you had vanished for good :P Really liking the idea of a multi-part story, can't wait to see more pooping action and all that.
By the way, have you thought ever making that third part to your "Potty Training your Shinigami" story? I've been dying to see how that would have ended.
Author's Response: Its unlikely that I'll finish that story, I sort of had an ending but it didn't make much sense and never really came together. I'll think about it but I have a few other stories I intend to write after this one before I revisit any old material.
Date: Nov 25, 2008 01:16 am [Report This]
The writing was okay for me, but it seems like there was absolutely not actual desperation here. That really could have been your intent though.
I guess its just personal preference but when characters have a paragraph or two of needing to go and then move straight to giving up and forcing it out its just a retelling of a mess.
In this case the telling of the accident itself wasn't enough to carry that part of the story.
Author's Response: You're right, but don't worry too much there will be one chapter focusing on desperation.
I guess its just personal preference but when characters have a paragraph or two of needing to go and then move straight to giving up and forcing it out its just a retelling of a mess.
In this case the telling of the accident itself wasn't enough to carry that part of the story.
Author's Response: You're right, but don't worry too much there will be one chapter focusing on desperation.
Date: Nov 24, 2008 10:52 pm [Report This]
The epitome of awsome. Keep up the good work.
Date: Nov 24, 2008 02:36 pm [Report This]
This is a nice little story, with a well-described "accident" scene. I look forward to the next installment. Tatsuki's criticisms of Orihime don't make her very likable in this story. I would love to read a scene where Tatsuki uncontrollably wets/messes herself and the tables are turned.
Date: Nov 24, 2008 04:14 am [Report This]