Shudders i dont care what the fuck it even if its cake i wouldn't eat ANYTHING THAT CAME OF OF SOMEONES ASSHOLE OR PEE HOLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviews For The Love Hina Stories
Date: Nov 12, 2012 11:56 pm [Report This]
This one has always been weird. Technically I'm not into vore, as the idea is just bizarre, but you handled it in this in a way that isn't too disturbing or disgusting *obviously ignoring the fact that the girl was pooping baked good, XP*
Date: Nov 06, 2009 06:36 pm [Report This]
Mmm. Shinobu is my favorite Love Hina character, and certainly my favorite to have wetting her panties. This does so cry out for more someday, when you get the inspiration :)
Date: Jan 05, 2009 10:05 pm [Report This]
Wow... That was certainly different. I was NOT aware that MS Word could be used that way, hehe.
Other than the normal grammar errors, though, I can find very little wrong with this fic, though I, too, am not really a fan of blood, nor anal, nor of the "ahem" background.
The idea, though, of Su inventing that certainly seems plausible, and, since I know there's a pic that's done in the same style, I'd look forward to seeing a fic on that, though, of course, I'd probably want Su's fantasy to be something to do with WS, lol.
Great job as always, AL.
FallenStar
Date: Nov 03, 2007 10:41 am [Report This]
Not bad,I don't know much about love Hina but this was pretty good. Nice sex scenes, you cover all her holes ^~
Date: Nov 02, 2007 08:37 pm [Report This]
Hey, nice fic! I love seeing the"innocent" cute little Shinobu being "not so innocent." There were only two problems I had with this story. The first is that I'm really not a fan of blood when it comes to sex,and even though I enjoyed Shinobu losing her virginity, I cringed at the mention of blood. The second was that I really wanted you to finish the anal part of it (I'm a big fan), but I guess since it was hurting Shinobu too much, I'm glad it stopped. If there's one thing I DON'T want to read about it's Shinobu in pain! All in all, a very good fic. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Thx
now that you read the 'lesser' version, how about e-mailing me and I'll send you the the original, intended version. It'll make rereading it more enjoyable, at least IMO ^_^
Date: Nov 02, 2007 03:45 am [Report This]
Hah! Another good peeing fic involving the one and only Loli superstar Shinobu. Fantastic! I especially liked the end with Kuro, it's so something that would happen. You really do know these characters don't you? Plus anything with Su's horny juice is great in my book. How I wish that that could have been part of the manga, or even better, a spin-off hentai version of the animke. Alas, such is not the case, although your fics are just as good. Keep up the good work! MORE SHINOBU PLEASE!!!!
Date: Oct 29, 2007 04:17 am [Report This]
A short, simple and too-the-point fic. Nice job. I always love it when the Hinata girls "enjoy themselves", espeically cute little, "innocent" (not anymore, I guess, huh?) Shinobu. Good job. Keep it up! MORE PLEASE!!!!
Date: Oct 29, 2007 04:09 am [Report This]
A nice little story about how hinobu became involved wth the other Hinata girls. I especially liked the awkward conversation involving Shinobu, Naru and a request for a certain bannana. Call me what you want, but I'm definitely partial to Shinobu (she's my favorite Loli of all time, followed closely by Sakura Kinamoto). Any fic including her is OK in my book, and when she;s in you capable hands, I'm never dissappointed. Good job once again. MORE SHINOBU PLEASE!!!!!
Date: Oct 29, 2007 04:04 am [Report This]
I have to say, out of all your series' I like this one the best (maybe I'm impartial to Love Hina or maybe I like the idea of the horny juice, or maybe I just like the way you've written these stories, but this series of yours is my favorite). A classic that is right back where it belongs. Good job. Will you be adding any more to it, or is it completed? I thought you were going to do Haruka and maybe even Naru's little sister (from the anime), but you don't have to. MORE LOVE HINA PLEASE!!!!
Author's Response: I've always though about doing Haruka and Mai, I just never got around to it
Author's Response: I've always though about doing Haruka and Mai, I just never got around to it
Date: Oct 29, 2007 04:00 am [Report This]
No doubt about it, you are always the first to push these stories to new boundaries, and especially with this one, you have succeeded. I enjoyed reading this so much, my mouth was beginning to water from wanting to eat Shinobu cake (she's already so adorable and cute I want to eat her up; making her into a scrumptious cake was almost too much)! And the creative solution for solving her problem is just what I'd expect from you: a great idea. Please keep more Love Hina stories coming, and don't be afraid to push more boundaries!
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you like it ^_^
And don't worry, I already have a new Love Hina fic planned.
Date: Oct 29, 2007 03:57 am [Report This]
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