I like this series more with every chapter. One thing I liked in this one was your mentioning Sakura taking a few "normal" human sized soft and stinky dumps in the school girl's room in between her monster loads. It was also nice that she remembered to courtesy flush in the second restroom, good to know there are toilets in this world that have seen Sakura's butt and survived! The story surrounding the action was interesting for this type of fic. and, if not truly epic action, was at least creative enough to be interesting by it's self.

I believe that they use squat toilets in Thailand even more that Japan, as they haven't embraced western culture as much. If Sakura was ever going to get her killer behind over one of those and drop a brown mountain in it, the next chapter would be the perfect time. Of course, I agree that that whole plot point could be very easily skipped over as it really has nothing to do with the main action of the stories. As we already had Chun Li make an appearance, I would love to see Cammy get in on the action in a future chapter, she was always my favorite SF girl. When you mentioned the other girls at school complaining about Sakura's normal dump, I realized that all her toilet killers so far have been relatively private or with someone who was very understanding. It would be fun to see her have to lay one of those in a stall (or two) with nothing but short, thin partitions separating her from a dozen other girls.

I have to ask, was Sakura's use of a colon cleanser and the resulting volume and consistency of her load inspired by some of the Joy Angels girls using them to produce real life record dumps recently?

Author's Response: What can be more epic then a night flight to Thailand! It's up to Orpheum if she lets loose over a squat toilet or let her farts echo inside a standard western toilet in part 5. If I read his review right I guess her next pitstop wil be pretty public. I did nto think about Joyangeles when I wrote this, its kinda lnog since they put out some very good stuff, so I'm not all that up to date with whats going on there though I've seen the clips you refer to and can see where you are coming from.

All the chapters in this series are pretty much "big dump, no plot," but getting past that I found this chapter entertaining. I like the plot point about Sakura eating the herbal remedies under the assumption that they were candy. That's funny and clever. I also like her needing two toilets to take care of all her business. I didn't see that coming. The descriptions of the dumps are good, but my favorite part is "Sakura let a goofy grin spread on her face as she relaxed and resumed her dump." It's fun to picture.

Now for the criticisms. You wrote "cower" instead of "cover" three times. You said Sakura had no money, then she bought food at the cafe. And, although it might be possible, I can't picture "skipping discreetly." Only minor criticisms. This is fun and I look forward to the next chapter, although this series isn't exactly my sort of thing. Actually, I even have a request, if you or Orpheum are open to those.

Author's Response: I did not say she had no money at all, she did not have enough to go on the classic tax free spree. Glad you enjoyed it overall!

Wow finally, the 4th series! I wonder how Ryu would react if he actually found out! LoL! Great one yarr, and nice pooping session also!

Author's Response: I immagine his face would go all dark and shady, so that his eyes would not show and his bandanna would wave profusely in a wind appearing out of nowhere while lightning flashed behind him. Even if he was indoors :p