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Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Anime Lover Signed
Awesome! when is part 3 coming?
Date: Feb 10, 2011 06:39 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: datar0ck Signed
Great story. Really funny. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: Sep 28, 2009 03:57 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

*Calmly enjoying a walk through the woods, suddenly a whistling noise is heard*

Huh?

CRACK!

*Is whacked upside the head by the flying toilet. A toilet icon appears in the right corner of the screen*

#Toilet# Killed Orpheum...

 

XP

Date: Jun 25, 2009 12:02 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Zee_phyro Signed

Interesting! That's what you get for becoming Tsunade's apprentice! What a power XD

Can't wait for the next, yarr......

Date: Jun 24, 2009 05:28 am [Report This]
Title: Before the gale Reviewer: JManime Signed

Hhmmmmm I see Tsunade is listed as one of the characters

And in your story you said that there were three stalls, but only two are occupied... Is Tsunade gonna make a surprise  appearence, maybe she even scolds Sakura about how little she learned in her medical training if she can only hold in her dump for a week, and explain that she can hold it for (insert number) days due to her medical experties.... unfortunately or fortunately times up for Tsunade and she needs a place to unload

Whatever you come up with I'm sure it'll be great, I just wrote this incase you needed any kind of treatment for writers block, but so far this definately has the look of a famous yarr story :)

Date: May 30, 2009 01:35 am [Report This]
Title: Before the gale Reviewer: Toasty Signed
Damn, I'm pumped about this story. Yarr writing about Sakura...it's like a dream come true!

Make sure you hurry up with the next part, and good luck.
Date: May 29, 2009 10:48 pm [Report This]
Title: Before the gale Reviewer: DrBones Signed
Creative title on this one, took me a second to get it after I read the Story Notes.

I'm glad Hinata made an appearance in this as I really like her (like almost everyone here it seems). Given what we know about her, I think this is really close to the way she would actually handle her dumps; wait for days until she was sure no one would be around a public restroom and then spend an hours letting out loads of backed-up poop. I kind of wish we could have see her making those three piles.

My only question is how would Hinata know it's Sakura in the room with her? She never said anything out loud and you would think that if Hinata could see her shoes under the stall, Sakura could see hers as well, unless she just didn't notice.

I see Tsunade is listed as a character in this too, will a flashback of her demonstrating how a little "chackra laxative" action be coming in the next chapter? I'm expecting great things from Sakura's butt.
Date: May 29, 2009 09:36 pm [Report This]
Title: Before the gale Reviewer: phil Signed
This is gonna be good, hurry with the sequels. I love Hinata.
Date: May 29, 2009 08:47 am [Report This]
Title: Before the gale Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
Nice introduction to what will no doubt be an enormous poop. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it.
Date: May 27, 2009 07:02 pm [Report This]
Title: Before the gale Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

*Walking somewhere in the shopping district of Konohana*

Hmm-mmm-hmmm

 

*KABOOM!*

What the fu-

*Is cut off as an explosion sweeps everyone in the surrounding off their feet and through the air*

 

*In a crator, Sakura is panting with relief, a chunk of porcelin and a gushing water piper are that remain, and a very scared Hinata*

>:3

 

Now I really should consider that story based on the Sakura pic...

Date: May 27, 2009 12:42 am [Report This]
Title: Before the gale Reviewer: Anime Lover Signed
very nice, I definatly want to read more ^_^
Date: May 26, 2009 02:04 pm [Report This]
Title: Before the gale Reviewer: Zee_phyro Signed
Wow2, nice prologue!!!!! Can't wait to see more of it yarr! keep it going!!!
Date: May 26, 2009 12:52 am [Report This]
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