I'm surprised that people haven't commented on this story, because I really enjoyed it. While it might have a few 'new' ideas, which many people have not grasped yet, and are not turned on by, this story is very well written, and I can easily see it becoming one of my favorites, if it is continued, of course.

I do think that it is refreshing to see a story that doesn't follow the same formula, IE: Anime Girl -> Eats A Lot -> Takes A Huge Dump... Not to say I don't enjoy that formula, but something new is always welcome.

Great stuff, keep it up! :)

The plot of the story itself is great, but.... the idea of pedo really doesn't get me at all. I'm not saying it's bad, in fact it's great. But once again, the pedo.