A belated re-revivew, but this is certainly much better now that it's been split up from the huge wall it originally was shown as.
Overall, it's quite a fun story, with a premise that isn't too unusual for the series. There are some iffy spots in the grammar, but nothing too jarring. Only other gripe would be that Hermione should have finished her dump before the end. The way it goes, it just sort of stops like "That's it.", it's just abrupt.
Reviews For Rectus gatous humilicustic exidus
Date: Feb 23, 2016 12:42 am [Report This]
Awesome story. Excellet description of Hermoine filled with poop and of her expelling the poop.
Date: Aug 29, 2015 11:51 am [Report This]
Finish this funny masterpiece of comedey!
Date: Dec 24, 2010 03:30 pm [Report This]
wow, that was very entertaining ^_^
Date: Jul 07, 2009 12:18 pm [Report This]
I'm with Orpheum, no one likes walls 'o text.
edit the format and I'll happily read it
Date: Jul 06, 2009 11:03 pm [Report This]
Wow it's great! The details are unbelievable and I bet Harry would have his own 'private time' after seeing that. Too bad you didn't finish Hermione's pooping session.
Date: Jul 06, 2009 09:51 pm [Report This]
Whoa, big block. I'm sorry, but it'd give me, and likely anyone else a headache to try and read this.
I'd advise going back and breaking it up into paragraphs. A general rule of thumb I know is to break every 4 periods, of course if the sentence or 'part' requires more, then it's fine.
Trust me, it'll be much easier for people to read and understand.
Date: Jul 06, 2009 09:03 pm [Report This]