Reviews For Spicy Hot Laxative
quite nice ^_^ Etna and Flonne certainly seem to be in character
Date: Sep 25, 2011 08:44 pm [Report This]
I think that this was definitely a good story. It may have been a bit rushed, but you certainly have both Etna's and Flonne's characters down pat. Plus, the poop scenes were more than adequately descriptive. I also agree with you that you should revisit Etna. All in all a fine piece of work, in my opinion.
Date: Oct 29, 2007 02:57 am [Report This]
I sure hope you do use Etna again, given the nature of the games, it'd be simple to do a story with her doing a mega ultra dump. :P
Am I right or am I right? ;)
But still an excellent story.
Date: Sep 10, 2007 10:37 pm [Report This]