What happend to chater 5+6?
It goes straight from 4 to 7?
Reviews For Journey to Republic City
Date: Jan 04, 2018 01:11 am [Report This]
This is the best series on here i especially love when she is dedperate it sould be a regular thing that mako has to awaken her monsters but for some reason every time he does something happens that forces her to hold it
Date: Jul 15, 2014 03:15 pm [Report This]
Being able to read and write are totaly different things.... but your right its crap I will delete it.
Date: May 03, 2014 11:41 am [Report This]
Considering that film is a NEW thing, in Korra's "world", security cameras seem highly unlikely, even IF it's a key factor to the story (how else would Tarrlok know?)
Also, was promised Ikki and/or Jinora... got no Ikki or Jinora.
Also, was promised Ikki and/or Jinora... got no Ikki or Jinora.
Date: May 03, 2014 11:14 am [Report This]
... Also I was promised Jinora and/or Ikki.
Now that I read this chapter, despite the big incongruity of Toph keeping a diary, it was a fun read... though I somehow doubt Iroh would want a young girl of Toph's size UNLESS she coerced him, and seduced him.
Now that I read this chapter, despite the big incongruity of Toph keeping a diary, it was a fun read... though I somehow doubt Iroh would want a young girl of Toph's size UNLESS she coerced him, and seduced him.
Date: May 03, 2014 11:10 am [Report This]
I have a strong problem with this chapter. Toph, being blind and cannot read, would NOT keep or even write in a diary .
GRANTED, this is a piece of fiction, and for efro fantasies... but c'mon; She's admitted she cannot read, and that books do nothing for her (not unless it was something she could listen to).
GRANTED, this is a piece of fiction, and for efro fantasies... but c'mon; She's admitted she cannot read, and that books do nothing for her (not unless it was something she could listen to).
Date: May 03, 2014 11:02 am [Report This]
Aw MAN, why did you not get into having Ikki peeing or pooping? POR QUE?!?!?
Otherwise it was a good, fun fic. 8/10
Author's Response: Next chapter and another down the line :)
Otherwise it was a good, fun fic. 8/10
Author's Response: Next chapter and another down the line :)
Date: Jan 24, 2014 04:39 pm [Report This]
Kind of expecting more but still a good chapter my only concern was I wish you can update faster cause this is a great story DONT ABANDONE IT :)
Date: Aug 26, 2012 10:57 pm [Report This]
Keep it up love this story
Author's Response: Thanks I have ideas for at least another 5 chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks I have ideas for at least another 5 chapters.
Date: Jul 20, 2012 03:12 am [Report This]
You must continue this story you did a great chapter keep it up
Date: Jun 04, 2012 04:35 pm [Report This]
I like this.
I hope you continue....especially with Tenzin's daughters Ikki and Jinora. Think....Airbending farts
Date: Jun 04, 2012 07:21 am [Report This]
Quite nice. But I feel it could be longer, play up on Korra hiding around, maybe causing some mischief or at least have her thinking about the trip to Republic city while playing up the building desperation. Aside from that, it's not a bad effort, though it needs some work. There are many parts where you should have placed commas, which helps to keep sentences from running together and/or avoid some confusion like the bit near the end. It should read: "Using water-bending, Korra washed her butt..."
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll work on the length a little for the next one. I fixed the part you mentioned and added a slight explanation. Again thanks for the review :)
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll work on the length a little for the next one. I fixed the part you mentioned and added a slight explanation. Again thanks for the review :)
Date: Jun 03, 2012 01:18 am [Report This]
Very good story! Don't worry about your grammer it was just fine. The story had nice flow and detail. Can't wait to read more!
Date: Jun 02, 2012 10:13 pm [Report This]
great job, ive only see 6 episodes, but you captured Korra 's persoa wel
Date: Jun 02, 2012 01:19 pm [Report This]
Great, can't wait to read the rest.
Date: Jun 01, 2012 11:12 pm [Report This]
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