Very well written great job

I'm not particularly into scat, so besides the scene at the end, it was a nice fic

This is a stand-alone, but you continue it? lol.

This is a cute, but kinky story. However, I was hoping you'd have gone into detail of Kari's descent onto Tai's mouth; what he saw as she squatted down over him.

Anyways, this was very good, and i think I'll enjoy this for some time.

Author's Response: Thanks! Don't worry, there'll be more stories written for you to enjoy :)