Very nice. Do you think there'll be more. I could sense that our little heroine was developing a bit of a fetish (at least that's how it seemed to me, heheheh).
Keep up the great work!
Reviews For Two in Harmony Surpasses One in Perfection
This story is great! I like the fart noises. It's also good to see a Persona 3 story (not to mention a story after the long drought). Looking forward to Chapter 2.
Date: May 20, 2010 12:22 am [Report This]
Very good first effort. While I'm not terribly familiar with the game, it feels like something that could have been a 'cut' scenario from the title.
Date: May 17, 2010 04:15 pm [Report This]
HWAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!
Oh man, this is so awesome! This has all of my favorite things in it...hot girls, buddy dumping and masturbating! That's the best! Please write another chapter! The quality of the writing was really good, too, especially for the first story you've posted here. Keep up the good work!
Oh man, this is so awesome! This has all of my favorite things in it...hot girls, buddy dumping and masturbating! That's the best! Please write another chapter! The quality of the writing was really good, too, especially for the first story you've posted here. Keep up the good work!
Date: May 17, 2010 10:35 am [Report This]