Reviews For Lemina's Folly
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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Serika Signed
Nice to see Lunar fanfiction. Lemina's chamberpot line really highlights her goofy attitude from the game. It's also neat that she could have peed when no one was around but she was on the "honor system", i guess. :)
Date: Jan 05, 2011 05:53 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Jimmy Olsen Signed
I was wondering what happened to this story. I loved the holding spell, and the line "My kingdom for a chamber pot!" Upon rereading it, I see there's much more to like. The description of the accident is great, and I like how there's a creative and reasonable excuse for her to ignore her needs. A rather short story, but a sweet one!
Date: Nov 27, 2010 04:15 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: packrat Signed
Great descriptions and scenery.  I love how you had here hold it in long enough to complete her task and still not make it back in time.  The "containment" spell was a very nice touch.  It almost made me think she might make it back.  Still, she made it out of the forest, so her spell did help her somewhat.  All in all, it was a great story.
Date: Nov 14, 2010 07:44 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed
Still one of your best classics. You definately need to get back in the game someday, there's been so many things. You still haven't shown shown us the conclusion of the Kameya story. And I'm sure Yuna is feeling quite lonely and unloved lately. :P
Date: Nov 14, 2010 04:27 pm [Report This]
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