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Title: Guest #1: Mall Girl Reviewer: Jimmy Olsen Signed
Sorry, Ariana, I don't much like vomit scenes so I don't go in depth describing them. But the format of this fic means that you or somebody else can add a vomit scene as the next chapter if you like.
Date: Jun 04, 2011 04:38 am [Report This]
Title: Two Girls at a Party Reviewer: Ariana321 Signed
Would have been much better had you gone into detail about the woman vomiting. Vomit scenes are always so horribly neglected.
Date: May 30, 2011 12:20 am [Report This]
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