Reviews For The Moon's Flood
This is a remarkable story and I truly enjoyed reading it. Excellent descriptions and stunning story flow.
Date: Jan 06, 2012 05:08 am [Report This]
Nice story! Although it is a long story, the way you told it is not boring at all.
I'm a bit sad that no humiliation is involved, since the queen did pee herself in front of the guests. I was hoping that the queen would suffer a bit of humiliation before Niamh decided to claim that the queen is the sacred Fluenta.
But overall, it is a nice story. Good job.
Date: Jul 11, 2011 10:43 am [Report This]
I enjoy the world you've created, and I really love the premise of various bladders magically draining into one (Anime Lover used a similar premise with bowels once). Plus the twist at the end was cool. I'd say you've made a good debut.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I always prefer it when the victim is saved from humiliation at the last minute.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I always prefer it when the victim is saved from humiliation at the last minute.
Date: Jul 05, 2011 01:05 am [Report This]
Goodness gracious, pretty good work
Date: Jun 30, 2011 08:29 pm [Report This]
Wow, excellent story! I love being pleasantly surprised by a new author like this. Some things I liked about this story:
- Interesting, well-drawn characters
- Detailed fantasy setting with a lot of flavor
- Nice and long, but doesn't feel boring or drawn out
- BOOBIES :)
Constructive Criticism:
- I'd personally like to see more detailed descriptions of the pee accidents in the future. The description of the final accident was pretty good, but there was so much build-up leading to it I felt like it could have been more...gratuitous? Well, that's just a personal preference of mine.
All in all, great job! I think this is a really strong contender for the story contest. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you, and I for one would enjoy an epilogue or sidestory with this universe and characters.
And to think, the forums were just lamenting the lack of new contributors...
Author's Response: Ask and ye shall receive, I suppose. Glad you liked it, and I do appreciate the feedback.
Author's Response: Ask and ye shall receive, I suppose. Glad you liked it, and I do appreciate the feedback.
- Interesting, well-drawn characters
- Detailed fantasy setting with a lot of flavor
- Nice and long, but doesn't feel boring or drawn out
- BOOBIES :)
Constructive Criticism:
- I'd personally like to see more detailed descriptions of the pee accidents in the future. The description of the final accident was pretty good, but there was so much build-up leading to it I felt like it could have been more...gratuitous? Well, that's just a personal preference of mine.
All in all, great job! I think this is a really strong contender for the story contest. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you, and I for one would enjoy an epilogue or sidestory with this universe and characters.
And to think, the forums were just lamenting the lack of new contributors...
Author's Response: Ask and ye shall receive, I suppose. Glad you liked it, and I do appreciate the feedback.
Author's Response: Ask and ye shall receive, I suppose. Glad you liked it, and I do appreciate the feedback.
Date: Jun 30, 2011 01:44 pm [Report This]