I really wish we had more chapters...and things like farts with pooping, related fetish stuff like cramping etc...I'm sure I could go on forever if I just collected my thoughts.
This is a really cool story (and I'm glad you write) but if it were rewritten it could be damn perfect...or rather so much closer to perfection than what it is now. Also I agree with indulging in fetishes like vomit. That stuff is both cool and but often overlooked.

excellent buildup with the farting and would love more of that. Toilet room is cool too.

Superb. The buildup with her being gassy, her loss of control and gradual progression into play contribute to a consistent eroticism.

Excellent, more vomit in the coming chapters please! :D