So, any chance for a sequel or continuation?

The Unrealism doesn't bother me but evening out the detail as shown in Jimmy Olsen's review might be a good idea. anyway, when I first read this I thought "this has got to be one of the best diapered stories on this site," so please write more of this kind of thing.

Odd theme, not my particular cup of tea, but this was a good piece of work, although a little unrealistic as J.O put it, but not bad overall.

The wetting at the beginning is described excellently, and I also love how you describe the "moment" of the opening scene. The description is also great in the scene in the car with her diaper and tight jeans. It's unlike any scene I've ever read. The potty scene seems quick and under-detailed in comparison to these two scenes.

From that moment on I was really curious about what was going on, why a young adult woman was wetting a diaper when she could hold it, and shy she took it so casually. The explanation you give isn't very realistic, and I find it pretty creepy. The mention of "the occasional unexpected quickie" doesn't help. But on the other hand I enjoy the juxtaposition of college girls and potty training.

There are a few typos, and one puzzling oddity. You say, "She bent forward ever so slightly and gave a quick psych," which doesn't make sense to me.

Overall I enjoy this story, but I find it unsettling that Alison is so babyish, and that so many people go along with this. I prefer stories where the diapered characters are basically mature and sane except for their potty problems.

Author's Response: Understandably, that was kind off what I was going for when it came to the overall theme. I too like most stories to have a character who chooses to be diapered and who thinks of it as a "dirty pleasure", however, as a one time story I wanted to try something we. The idea of a college student, someone who is supposed to be breaking away from her parents and become an adult, being so deeply rooted in infantilism and her mother was an interesting topic for me. That and the fact that I wanted someone who is proud to use a children's potty for this contest was what sealed the fate of poor Alison. I admit the typos are annoying and looking it over I see that posting it immediately after finishing was brash but asmy irst contest entry I was worried about a deadline. Thanks for the feedback, it's nice to know someone thought about my sorry after reading it!

great story! really cute! please make a sequel