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Title: chapter 1: Morning gas Reviewer: yarr Signed
Ah, new blood! A very good debut, hope to see more.

Author's Response: Thank's! There will be more to come. I'm glad that you really liked it, your stories are some of the best :)
Date: May 28, 2012 03:40 am [Report This]
Title: The movement Reviewer: ruffryder Signed
Loved it 
Date: May 27, 2012 09:08 pm [Report This]
Title: Breakfast Reviewer: ruffryder Signed
Nice continue this story 
Date: May 26, 2012 08:26 pm [Report This]
Title: Breakfast Reviewer: cncncn Signed
Great story with excellent descriptions of burping and farting. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks, I;m glad you liked it:)
Date: May 26, 2012 12:05 pm [Report This]
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