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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Maxxximus Signed
This is a good alternate version! Almost to the point of femdom (which I like!) Keep it up withsome future chapters; write out all of RE2 with a sexy scat! Also, have Claire play a kinky dominant role, defacating on Chief Irons, Leon and Annette..! With foot fetish, femdom dirty talk, facesitting, pissing
Date: Sep 29, 2014 06:02 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Unsung Soldier Signed
I did some editing here.
Date: Feb 03, 2013 07:19 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: OrpheumZero Signed

Good effort, but feels very unpolished and disjointed. There are words missing here and there, as well as some odd grammatical choices. Also, a little more insight into Claire's mind, like why she suddenly would want to be seen/caught should be added.

Another thing. Did you make the story a round-robin so others could add to it? Or did you click it by mistake? The option is there if you're intending for others to add to this.



Author's Response: I pretty much did round robin to see if others would be interested. I'll try to write better next time.
Date: Nov 06, 2012 01:22 pm [Report This]
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