Not too shabby an effort, there were some avoidable errors (like spelling 'piece' as 'peice').

Also, the characterization was lacking- what I can infer from this fic is that Shannon and Stan are badass... but that's it.

Nevertheless, it was definitely a better piece of work than expected.

Author's Response: I'm sorry if I mispelled piece. I'm literally going to fix that right now. Also, apologies for the characters not being anything like they were in the game. I didn't have a clue with what to do with the characters, (I.E. Forgotten what dialog was said and didn't know how I should have the characters react to this situation besides being scared to death and not being able to get some sleep because they were too busy fighting the creatures and what not) so, they wound up like this. But, at least you liked it. Thanks, man. I'll do some actual research for my Fics from now like I did with my F.E.A.R. 2 Project: Origin Fic. (Which was the first Fic I ever posted on the main site)