That was actually really good, the way you described her body was really good. I'd really like to see a story of her taking a huge dump.
Oh my god, this story was amazing! I loved every minute of it! The man with the ability to manipulate water into bladders, the woman with a Save and Load feature that messes with reality in different ways, and the descriptions of her desperation and relief were spot-on perfect! In fact you remind me of-
Oh my god, you're the guy who made Mary's Bad Day! No wonder this story is so perfect!!! I loved that game and this story is even better! I hope you've got more ideas in you, and I can't wait to read your next addition to this site. (And hey, if you happen to have any other works pertaining to these subjects, would you mind sharing where we could find them?)
Author's Response:
Thanks very much for the kind words, i'm glad you liked Mary's Bad Day as well.
I think i'll only be uploading any kink stories I make to this website so don't worry.