An interesting story. But it feels bit out of character, that is to say it doesn't feel quite like something from the show. Of course, I never watched a lot of Foster's, so I'm not entirely familiar with all the characters.

Still, I think the characters could use more of their identifiable quirks, so they feel more like themselves. As it is, this seems like a story that could easily have the names swapped, and still play out largely the same.

Also, some parts are missing quotations, and some of the sentences are oddly spaced, making some dialogue appear to belong to the wrong character.