Reviews For The Spell Book
Needs a lot of work. Dialogue feels weak and pedestrian, the blocks of text make it hard to read and cramped, and the story just feels more like a long description rather than a proper narrative.
Date: Aug 15, 2013 05:28 pm [Report This]
Could have been semi-decent if it wasn't so crude and juvenile.
"Fuckin fuck her fucking shit fuckin pussy fuckin'"
Is all I could really get out of it.
Date: May 20, 2013 05:05 pm [Report This]
Not even remotely readable...
Date: May 20, 2013 05:45 am [Report This]