Reviews For Fartytales: The Mango Princess
Awesome! Do you think you could describe the farts with brrmmp or braapp type effects? It sounded like she and the mare were ripping monster farts. The story was vivid and I hope there is more to come
Date: Jan 30, 2014 04:44 pm [Report This]
I adore your descriptions of pooping and desperation; such florid language for such a... you know... subject matter. Looking forward to more of this in the future!
Date: Jan 27, 2014 10:27 am [Report This]
I liked the first two parts. but the third was a bit strange. Love the style of the story though, and am looking forward to more additions!
Date: Jan 27, 2014 06:54 am [Report This]
Nice little story. Could have been longer. Also, may want to make it more clear in the beginning next time that some of the pooping may be coming from an animal. Not that it's disallowed, but it's just good to make sure it's known so anyone who'd like to avoid that can.
Date: Jan 26, 2014 09:56 pm [Report This]
This was pretty good. Very well written, I admit I found myself referencing a dictionary every once in a while for certain words ^^.
The horse at the end was unexpected. Ella's desperation, release, and reaction felt genuine. Good work.
The horse at the end was unexpected. Ella's desperation, release, and reaction felt genuine. Good work.
Date: Jan 26, 2014 07:44 pm [Report This]