This was... really not too bad. The characters were believable. They felt pretty real. I felt like a fly on the wall in a private moment of their lives :).
The ultimate release was really nicely done, too. The onomatopoeias were pretty good ^^.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Reviews For Just.....Nevermind
Date: Jun 25, 2014 08:08 pm [Report This]
Not too bad, could use some extension, it's a little short. However, I give you a five star rating for your work. Keep it up, bro. You're doing good.
Author's Response: Its a short story so I don't mind I write on deviant so its cool. Thanks man
Author's Response: Its a short story so I don't mind I write on deviant so its cool. Thanks man
Date: Jun 15, 2014 06:25 pm [Report This]