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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Captain Cold Signed
This is really good! I don't know why it's not getting more attention.

My only complaint is that action could be drawn out a bit more, and that it could use more description.

Author's Response: As far as readership goes, well there's a broad variety here, it's not really a competition imo. Also it's on DA. Thanks for the feedback. I wanted it to be a bit more voyeuristic although you're right, that could be drawn out more. I shall apply this to the sequel.
Date: Nov 02, 2015 12:06 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: bored Signed
This is your best work yet! Keep up the excellent stories!

Author's Response: Thank you. There's more to come!
Date: Oct 22, 2015 04:38 pm [Report This]
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