Reviews For Doodles
Huh, the way some segments began, it sounded like they were meant to connect, at least for a few.
Date: Mar 13, 2016 10:46 pm [Report This]
I love reading stories about fat gassy girls! Keep it up!
Date: Mar 13, 2016 07:48 pm [Report This]
Interesting. Though I will say it's a bit hard to follow where one thing ends and the next part begins. I'm assuming it's all one character, or at least for most of the "pieces". And certainly a more defined description of the girl would have been nice.
Still, it's great to see something new from you, and the set up is kind of fun since it sounds like a descriptive slideshow of actual pictures/doodles.
Author's Response: The gratuitous use of space separates each segment. No set character here, its all just short practice snippets written for new situations and events that got a good response from the target audience, so I collected them together and posted them here. If someone wants to do pictures accompanying these they certainly could and should.
Still, it's great to see something new from you, and the set up is kind of fun since it sounds like a descriptive slideshow of actual pictures/doodles.
Author's Response: The gratuitous use of space separates each segment. No set character here, its all just short practice snippets written for new situations and events that got a good response from the target audience, so I collected them together and posted them here. If someone wants to do pictures accompanying these they certainly could and should.
Date: Mar 13, 2016 03:16 pm [Report This]
The Return of the King!
I'm happy you are still writing. We all await the completion of your next full story! Whenever that day comes, it will be a good day indeed!
I'm happy you are still writing. We all await the completion of your next full story! Whenever that day comes, it will be a good day indeed!
Date: Mar 13, 2016 06:57 am [Report This]