Great job, not much into vomit, but this was superbly well written

Great job, not much into vomit, but this was superbly well written

While I enjoyed the story, I feel you went WAY overboard on the humiliation side of the story. The world and all of the characters seem extremely unnecessarily cruel. However I still enjoyed the story and would like to see more of your works, maybe just dial back a little on the humiliation.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. Definitely something to keep in mind for future stories. I'm really big on the whole humiliation thing as you can tell. I often take it a few steps too far :)

Did you have trouble beating Chun Li or something? Why that hate?

Author's Response: Just a fetish. I'm into the whole humiliation thing. Nothing personal against the character:)