Title: The Introduction Reviewer: davidlawson Signed

I LOVED this story. Absolutely brilliant premise.


personally  I found part three disappointing. I wasn’t interested in the purse bit : I wanted it to go straight to the toilet action while she was being secretly filmed. Could have had her blowing up bathroom while students in there laugh at her. Plus Green could have secretly spread the video around the school so shall srudents we’re laughing at the teacher taking a dump.


great story but I personally hoped part three would go in a different direction 

Author's Response: You know what's weird? That was actually somewhat my original idea, but then, I thought it was too mean, so I decided for a different one. Maybe I can make an different version of the ending. Would that be fine with you?
Date: Mar 03, 2018 02:06 am [Report This]

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