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Title: Yoshino's near disaster! Reviewer: Duce Signed
yeah I liked it, it was good, and I'm glad someone finally did a Savers fic, the characters seem to be in-character for most I can tell.

Author's Response:

I would hope so. As long as Marcus is obsessed with punching someting and Thomas has a smart ass comment about him, and Yoshi is still hot as anything, all's well in the universe.

I just wish there were more pictures of her, as far I can see, there's like only 5 that are worth keeping. Hopefully maybe Waru can make one eventually, though I think he said he's still new to the series.

Date: Jun 25, 2008 06:17 am [Report This]
Title: Yoshino's near disaster! Reviewer: Poowrite Signed
I don't know much about Digimon, I was always more of a Pokemon man myself, but I have to say this was pretty damned awesome.

Excellent job of building the story, it felt like an episode of an anime in this genre. Outstanding potty scene.

There were a few grammer errors here an' there, but nothing to detract from a great piece of pooping fiction.

Great work :)

Author's Response:

Personally I liked the series more than pokemon simply because it actually went somewhere. I mean, you can put Ash on a continent/island and do like 50 episodes and there's little difference. Sure the girls are cute, but I want him to be the master already! :P

If I had to say, Savers is probably the best in story, with Frontier second for having a unique "G-Gundam" style to it (it's the only time the kids become the digimon) and the first three series were pretty good but could have been better.

Thanks for the review. Now go read my giant story as well, please. :)

Date: Jun 24, 2008 10:12 pm [Report This]
Title: Yoshino's near disaster! Reviewer: Jimmy Olsen Signed
I never liked "Digimon," and don't know or remember much about it, but I liked this. The sly enemy taunting a desperate girl is a good concept, and it's used to good effect here. Just when I start to think I've read so many descriptions of pooping that nothing can be new to me, I read something like this. Besides that there's a lot of cleverly worded sentences, poop-related and otherwise. Great job!

The only thing that bothered me, besides a couple mistakes and the inevitable confusion of reading something set in a universe I don't know, was how at the beginning everybody made too much about Yoshino getting up and walking down the hall. Have they never heard of restroom breaks?

Author's Response:

Well here's a bit of a quick learners guide: Digimon Savers is set in a more realistic universe as opposed to the Pokemon-esqe one of the previous. For one the characters are drawn in bishonen style and thus reflect more accurate teens rather than the big heads/hands of the former series. DATS is an MIB like group, so they have to be prepared for anything. The fact that Marcus, whose known to blow even the littlest things into something more, has a habit of drawing attention to himself because of his stupidity.

Basically, Yoshi should have told him to shut it right then and there and left instead of pussyfooting around the issue and drawing more people to her.

Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it.

Date: Jun 24, 2008 08:40 pm [Report This]
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