You put an unusual amount of detail into the pee accidents; I like that and I especially like the bedwetting incident. Though you could always do better with poo and farts imo. However, the poo accident in the fourth chapter is handled in a particularly creative and effective way.

you appear to be....a genius at getting me aroused. I never thought a story like this would just pop out at me. Where can I get more of this?

this is one of my fav series, i was wondering if its going to continue?

MOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEE

I can't believe I forgot to leave you a review!

As always, great work! And of course the messing content always gets my seal of approval! Keep up the good work.

I love these stories. Both Audrey and the father character are likable, which is odd considering normally I wouldn't like a character like the father. There's something about his behaviour that makes him evil, and at the same time ... not evil.

As always, I enjoyed reading Audrey's plight and her inevitable accident. The wetting, while a little short, was described very well. I could actually see her panties saturating then leaking in my minds eye.

I really like your stories, and eagerly await chapter four of Audrey's adventures!

Another great chapter. I really like the way you tell these stories. They're interesting and fun to read. Audrey, especially, strikes me as a real and believable character.

Well, I'd have rather that she poo'd her panties or at least been shown doing the deed. But the rest of the story was top notch.

Great work!

heh, that was quite enjoyable, I liked the end ^_^

You have a real nack. This was a very well written story. The plot was interesting, as were the characters. I couldn't help but feel for Audrey.

Excellent work, I hope to see more from you in the future.

Author's Response: Thanks!  I've got more coming already.  I've got a story half-finished of a day at the amusement park.  It's been lots of fun to write, and I hope it'll be just as fun to read!