Despite not having much of a plot, this is an entertaining desperation/wetting story.  The one real problem I have with it is the misspellings.  I strongly suggest proofreading and resubmitting it when you get the time to.

Poor Ashley :). I guess it's her fault for being one of the best targets for "Damsel in Distress" type stories, though.

Good work on the fic. It was a tad short, but since it was almost all desperation that wasn't a huge deal.

Overall a good story. I always enjoy something set in a Resident Evil universe.