I follow the trends!
Stories to come (in somewhat chronological order of appearance)
- Selphie story for picture contest 1 (done, awaiting other prize)
- Naruto story trade (2/3 done)
- Completing the never finished Kagura story, guest "performance" by Sakaki - on hold
Sometime in the distant future:
- 2nd Melina story
Added one of the request stories. The next one will most likely not be posted here at the comissioner's request so things might be a bit silent from my end until Sakura here *pats Sakura's rotund butt* needs the washroom again and starts blasting! ;D
*is sent flying by Sakura's punch to my face*
Quote from: yarr on December 23, 2008, 09:26:51 AM
I've recently had fun doing story trades with people elsewhere. I'm open to do the same here, actually hoping for it as theres a lot of competent writers here.
http://nyou.autobotiacon.com/nf/viewstory.php?sid=242&chapter=6 <--Are you interested in continuing this story?
Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on December 25, 2008, 07:01:41 PMhttp://nyou.autobotiacon.com/nf/viewstory.php?sid=242&chapter=6 <--Are you interested in continuing this story?
I could do that. Any ways you want the story to take, anything special you want to happen? I guess you want her to somehow end up pooping? If so, just normal amount? A lot? A whole lot? The more details of how/what things you want to happen the better.
I could offcourse also just write from the intro there completely freehanded.
You might find this collaboration odd, but here's my plan. I want you to follow my fragment up however you want, provided you follow the minor rules below.
~Have Cici dump the load she's carrying. Where she poops is up to you. She can poop however much you think is reasonable for someone who poops each morning.
~Reveal what Cici did to provoke the retribution from Mary.
~End the story at a point where Cici needs to make another decision.
~No masturbation, rape, or same-sex action.
Feel free to characterize Cici, Mary, Chad, and any characters you add however you want, so long as they follow what I've already established. Then I want you to e-mail your chapter to me. I'll proofread it, integrate the first 2 chapters, and write the 3rd chapter. Then I'll post it all on Nyou Fiction, with little tags telling who wrote which parts. Does that sound acceptable?
Sure thing. Though I wont be able to touch this until maybe as far off as late jan 2009.
Regarding what you can conjure up for me as the trade, how bout finishing your Sailor moon story? And judging from the part already posted and Malachi's excellent comic with her its a considerable load waiting. Bonus points if some or all the other sailors are within hearing and/or smelling range when it happens 8)
How about I finish my Love Hina story instead? I've been drifting further and further from Sailor Moon fandom.
Sure, go ahead
(Jezz, I feel like I'm butting in on you and Jimmy's conversation. :-X)
I don't want to be rude and I'm sorry about your computer problems, but can I ask you about the CC, Code Geass pics. wile I have your attention? The second one posted in the tread has the bottom cut off and the third and fourth shots are just small "teasers" of her face not showing any action. Do you know if S2X is still working on them or are you holding the full versions until more CG stories are made? (He hasn't put them up on this site yet.) I'm a big um... collector ;) of his art so I would just like to know.
More on the subject, is there anything you would especially like to see next from my current projects list in your "Creative Spot" tread? I'm leaning toward the Ranma one next (you know, rather than actually working on things I promised or finishing what I started years ago. ;D) If you picked one of those for a trade, I would (hopefully :-[) have some real motivation to work and get it done in ?just? a few months.
I'm really serious about getting more stories for old Micro pics., so if you have a minuet sometime, could you peek at the file on that thread and maybe pick one or two that haven't been done from series you know enough about to try someday?
I'll put up those CC pics soonish, probably another "I post pics, you post dialogue" thingy, even tho its mostly orpheumzero whos the only contributor.
You tell me what micro pic you want to see a story attached to and I'll write it (After Jimmy's trade). I could do the Ranma pic sure, but my knowledge of that universe is limited.
For my end of the deal, how bout you add a story to the mini Kitsune comic?
Thanks for the update, I'll try my best to come up with a caption (probably based on the story as I know almost nothing about CG) when they come out.
The reason I wanted you to pick one first is because of just what you mentioned; we all have series/universe that we know better than others. It would drive me crazy trying to wright a story only based on a Wikipedia article or a few random episodes or manga panels found on line. When I do my fics., I really prefer to know the series/characters totally inside and out and have almost the entire thing committed to memory. What I was trying to avoid was a scenario where I say, "Please do a story on this pic." and you say, "Sorry I don't know that universe." then I say, "How about this one?" then you say, "I don't know that one either..." etc. The only thing I know for sure is it wouldn't be the Ranma one as I already have big plans for it. ;)
After looking at the file again, I would say the ones I would most want to see would be based on:
Amy witnessing Makoto excrete her cooking (Sailor Moon) -always liked jupiter :004:
Gassy Kagome (Inu-Yasha) -with dog-boy walking in on her :009:
Milly takes too long (Trigun) -not your typical "cute" little girl, but I do love ladies pooping in outhouses :005:
Haruhara Haruko (Fooly Cooly) -fun to see how this phyco alien deals with taking a dump ;D
Mitsune hogging the toilet or The glamor of living with girls (Love Hina) - even though I've never really seen the anime or manga, anything with a bunch of girls all going or fighting over a toilet is appealing :kawaii:
Out of those I hope you will find something you like and are familiar with. Of course, if you do pick one, I'll wright up a much more complex outline of what I want. No hurry though, I know you have a lot of stuff to do first before you can even think about this.
Ok, extremely stupid question time; what do you mean by "The mini Kitsune comic"? ??? If, as I suspect, it's one of the pics. on the Micro file or one of S2X's works, then the very fact that I have to ask that question should tell you that I know less than jack squat about the series in question. :-[
hmm.. I replied in pm. Did that one too not get through?
Ya, it was sent, but I didn't even know you could do that on this page! After reading your comment, I looked and saw the "Message" bar for the first time. I sent you one back now that I know how to do it, hey this could be usefull (duh). :xm0006: :009: :012: :015: :-[
I shamelessly tinkered with the first post! :-*
Sakura part 4 posted, hopefully Orpheum wont take as long with part 5, but hey, who am I to be impatient :-[
(http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/2883/sastz.jpg)
Um...wow. Gah. I...can't...breathe...
Why not? :o
There's just so much booty, it's choking me out. ;) It's a great picture.
You sure its not the gas? 8)
Do you do Sakura stories by request?
I'm always open to suggestions, but it would take a while unless you want it to replace the previous request.
There's some things queued up behind it and I've been busy with some trades on other sites.
No, I'd rather see my previous request done. But someday I think it would be cool of you (or somebody) wrote a Sakura story based on my "Hospital Humiliation" challenge.
Updated 1st post.
I think the bedpan idea is good. Maybe its an idea for a future chapter of the Sakura series. Or a standalone story on its own.
Quote from: yarr on May 19, 2009, 05:01:56 AM
Updated 1st post.
I think the bedpan idea is good. Maybe its an idea for a future chapter of the Sakura series. Or a standalone story on its own.
Let me guess: Sakura goes to a hospital - get an enema - then uses up pretty much EVERY single bedpan in the hospital as she unloads the mother of all dumps....
Holy shit... that could be our big 'Unmasking' for our little "Toilet Killer". *Ideas go spinning in head, like... spinning thing..ies*
Actually, I have it from pretty reliable sources in the health care field that bedpans are not used for enemas/bowel cleansing, if a normal toilet is not available they prefer using more roomy and less messy solutions like portable toilets.
(http://www.outdoorpros.com/images/prod/5/Texsport-15130-rw-17075-8490.jpg)
I don't have trouble visualizing Sakura's butt on one of those, filling up the bag as a perplexed nurse stands and watches next to a pile of already poo-filled plastic bags 8)
Quote from: yarr on May 20, 2009, 05:12:22 AM
Actually, I have it from pretty reliable sources in the health care field that bedpans are not used for enemas/bowel cleansing, if a normal toilet is not available they prefer using more roomy and less messy solutions like portable toilets.
(http://www.outdoorpros.com/images/prod/5/Texsport-15130-rw-17075-8490.jpg)
I don't have trouble visualizing Sakura's butt on one of those, filling up the bag as a perplexed nurse stands and watches next to a pile of already poo-filled plastic bags 8)
Hmm, I thought they did use bedpans for that sort of stuff. Oh well. Still, not a bad idea for how our little knuckleheaded pooper is 'found out'. ;D
My challenge didn't mention an enema, did it? I'm confused. ???
I like the idea of her using a bedpan as opposed to a portable toilet. It's just a pleasant mental image.
El bump
So how's the Sakura series coming?
Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on July 31, 2009, 04:06:41 PM
So how's the Sakura series coming?
Right now it's my turn to make the next part. Still haven't really gotten a good idea of how to follow up the plot from the last one. Though I did come up with a funny sequence based on a series of pics involving Sakura that I'll either use in the upcoming chapter or maybe a later one.
Dont' really have to follow up on the plot, off the bat I can think about things like food is a lot cheaper in Thailand then Japan, she can fill up her greedy gut pretty easily while there, maybe get plugged up from overeating and due to her now even larger capacity blow up a Thai bathroom or carry the extra weight back to Japan for a epic drop off there.
Maybe she finally gets to do that eating competition she's always on about, and that ends up as a rectal weapon of mass destruction.
Other ideas popping up could be having Ryu somehow witnessing her go, either he accidentally walks in on her killing a toilet while they travel or somehow ends up seeing/hearing the action or end result in another way and for the first time in years his stone face gets shocked.
That's always an idea. I just couldn't really think of something that would fit entirely. But the idea that her load quota is now expanded thanks to the cleaning out she got in your last part, she could build up a huge load that gets her into deep with either Thai police or maybe American forces if I do have her go to that hotdog eating contest. Maybe a flashback to Ryu fighting Sagat *like you said could be a possible event for the trip to Thailand*, then flashforward to Sakura winning a weiner eating contest and 'celebrationg' the only way she knows how; giving birth to a dozen mud babbies in nearby toilet. :P
So neither of you are planning on doing the hospital thing any time soon?
Probably not for the next bit, though if I can figure a clever way for Sakura to get blocked up enough to necessitate a visit to the doctor, then mayhaps good o' Dr. Yarr could give her 'check-up'. :P *Hands Yarr a Hazmat suit*
*Dons the suit and runs around with a crazed look waving a huge enema syringe around*
"OOooo Saakuraaaa..."
*Lies broken and bloody on the ground, enema syringe rammed into left ear, Hazmat suit in tatters*
Changed 1st post somewhat. RRaaallhhhh..
So what decides if your contest entry stars Sakura or Melina? ??? If it's a poll I'll vote for Melina.
I guess I listed it badly. I'ts all stuff I will probably eventually do, in say.. 2016 :)
Fixed the list a bit. Again.
Check this out, Yarr: http://amateur29.deviantart.com/art/giantess-Melona-wc-vulcano-142653841
Well, now the stage is set for your next Sakura chapter, and I have a suggestion. You should work in Sakura getting weighed before and after she unloads her cargo, showing a discrepency of about 20 pounds. Gal Sone proves that it's possible! ;D
20 pounds? Well a normal toilet is ruled out anyway, fictional janitors are ranting and raving over the befoulment of bowls and bathroom floors. I'm in the start phase of plotting part 6.
Maybe just have them roll in a empty industrial oil drum, fit a plastic seat on the edge and have Sakura plant her rotund rear on it, then after the gases have cleared deposit it with the other drums of radioactive waste beneath some mountain range.
After part 5 the only thing clear is that it will be a new record, for this series at least. I'm toying with a 2nd Melina story sometime next year but its still way way down on my list.
Time will tell. 8)
I was wondering if we would see Melina again... I can only imagine how a sequel would go. Perhaps she and another giantess go toe-to-toe in a bout of battleshits of titinic proportions? ;D
20 pounds is how much Gal Sone ate in that video, and I figure Sakura is her equal.
As for Melina, I'd love to read about her peeing so much that, when it cascades down a nearby cliff, people see a mysterious golden waterfall.
*Intermission music loops together with the animated ass jiggling*
(http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/4192/risty.gif)
So, when is Sakura 'due'? :P
Who is that in the pic?
Just some girl with unruly hair and a big ass I reconed, after your query I've identified her as Risty from queen's blade. The whole show appears to be ass and breasts. And some swords.
I might have to investgate.
(http://i608.photobucket.com/albums/tt165/darksideaa/snapshot20090402145752.jpg)
What's going on in that animation? It looks like she's pooping gold nuggets.
Queen's Blade! The anime where warrior girls wet themselves. My favorite anime ever, on principle.
I went and polished my Melina story out of boredom - cleaned it up somewhat and changed a few things, enjoy ^^
http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=226 (http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=226)
Something Evangelion coming soon. Toilets will suffer.
Possibly with all the Eva girls? Misato, Asuka, Rei, Mari, Ibuki, and Ritsuko? :3
So far Rei, off course, and also Asuka. The plot revolves arond a new lcl with after effects..
Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on August 11, 2009, 04:27:45 AM
So neither of you are planning on doing the hospital thing any time soon?
Isn't it already done? http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=512&chapter=1 (http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=512&chapter=1) I really enjoyed it too.
Well hell, may as well toss in that Mari girl from the remakes, as well as Misato, Ritsuko, and Maya. They all need love. =D
Nice to see you are coming up with a new story after so long. Think maybe you might regain some interest for our dear Sakura again? By the way, have you seen my new story with the ninja babe Ibuki? I think you'll like what her butt has to speak about. ;)
Quote from: SakuraLover25 on July 21, 2012, 08:39:15 AM
Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on August 11, 2009, 04:27:45 AM
So neither of you are planning on doing the hospital thing any time soon?
Isn't it already done? http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=512&chapter=1 (http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=512&chapter=1) I really enjoyed it too.
I posted that before the story was up.
Oops sorry :-[ didn't know if u saw it or not.
Quote from: yarr on July 21, 2012, 03:47:09 AM
So far Rei, off course, and also Asuka. The plot revolves arond a new lcl with after effects..
If you're still a bit unsure of plot, here's a thought: Misato "treats" (read: forces) all the girls to a party, where they eat tons. Somehow, the LCL stuff that Rei is using gets passed around with the other girls, making them all eventually need to drop massive loads.
There, now we have reason for Asuka, Rei, Mari, and whoever else to be busting toilets! I AM A GENIUS!! 8)
I have not seen the new movies, so I do not know the new characters or personalities well enough really.
The story is close to being done, just have the last part left, leading to Rei's ample bottom does bad things to a poor nerv toilet 8)
Just try not to forget that LCL is canonically supposed to be the blood of the first angels Adam and Lilith, harvested continuously from the severed torso of whichever one is still mostly intact.
On second thought, maybe you're better off forgetting all about the actual canon...
Quote from: EnragedFilia on October 31, 2012, 01:14:23 AM
Just try not to forget that LCL is canonically supposed to be the blood of the first angels Adam and Lilith, harvested continuously from the severed torso of whichever one is still mostly intact.
On second thought, maybe you're better off forgetting all about the actual canon...
Wait, I thought it was Liquid Mom™...then again I haven't watched that show for a while.
Does it matter? The show had a lot of pointless themes that derailed its otherwise brilliant deconstruction of "kids in giant robots".
This song encapsulates things pretty nicely:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aNvqtKv1bPo# (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aNvqtKv1bPo#)
I never liked NGE either. I said If I was stuck in the NGE universe, I would let one of those Angels stomp me to death.
At least it's easy to fix: just add Warhammer 40k! (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanFic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K)
If you think your idea is incompatible with the canon, can't you just set it in another universe?
Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on November 01, 2012, 10:50:19 PM
If you think your idea is incompatible with the canon, can't you just set it in another universe?
Well it's not like all our stories have to be 100% canon now, right? :P
Quote from: OrpheumZero on November 02, 2012, 12:08:58 AM
Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on November 01, 2012, 10:50:19 PM
If you think your idea is incompatible with the canon, can't you just set it in another universe?
Well it's not like all our stories have to be 100% canon now, right? :P
Yeah. That's why you should write about Olivier having an accident :P
Hope you're still working on that story. Rei must be dying (again) to drop her load! :P
It's coming along, slowly but surely. I do not have the time to contribute as much as I'd like anymore.
So here is an idea I'd planned to do myself, intended to be a long, multiple chapters thing that I've realized probably never will happen with my timeframe. Added it to the challenges for anyone interested.
http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/modules/challenges/challenges.php?chalid=233 (http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/modules/challenges/challenges.php?chalid=233)
Might toss in a drawing to the finished result if someone picks it up, to try to keep things alive here 8)
You know, if you're ever in need of some ideas, or advice of any kind, Yarr, I'm more than happy to help. Especially if it means getting you back into the game with writing. ;)
I saw your review on the DBZ story. What lines were copied/pasted exactly? Kind of odd someone would rip lines from our stories like that.
I believe some passages from the rei/faye stories, and also something from bluesniper's ayane one.
Any specific lines? Odd someone would blatantly copy lines like that. Then again, I know a lot of our stories have reused certain lines at times, and occasionally "borrowed" a few lines from one another. But someone just mixing a bunch of texts with nothing original of their own? A bit sad.
I cleaned up and did some small changes to my Cowboy Bebop story - jump to chapter 2 for the "redux" version.
http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=130&textsize=0&chapter=2 (http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=130&textsize=0&chapter=2)
Just read and reviewed it. Great job. It's nice to see you back in action, even if it's just a minor reworking of one of your oldest stories.
Hopefully you'll have that Evangelion story finish soon, I can't wait to see Rei and Asuka (and whoever else) introducing toilets to the "turd impact" :P
While I'm sure you're busy, hopefully you'll consider maybe checking out Sakura again, it'd be wonderful if we resume that series. =D
In the meantime, I should try and hurry up with that Code Geass story I've been mentioning.
Not dead yet.
Behold this amazing peice of Melina fanart.
http://ticx.deviantart.com/art/Volcano-mistreatment-499261558 (http://ticx.deviantart.com/art/Volcano-mistreatment-499261558)
Teaser 1 & 2 for my most likely next story
http://ticx.deviantart.com/art/PREVIEW-The-forbidden-city-539662372 (http://ticx.deviantart.com/art/PREVIEW-The-forbidden-city-539662372)
http://ticx.deviantart.com/art/PREVIEW-The-forbidden-city-part-2-545431201 (http://ticx.deviantart.com/art/PREVIEW-The-forbidden-city-part-2-545431201)
Color me teased/intrigued. I certainly like what I see and can't wait to read more.
Trying to submit a new story but sites giving me mysql errors.
QuoteWarning: in_array() expects parameter 2 to be array, null given in /home/nyou/nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/stories.php(282) : eval()'d code on line 3
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It's on my DA site meanwhile. (http://ticx.deviantart.com/)
I had the same problem with mine but it ended up uploading anyway. Just checked the page and yours is uploaded twice.
Seems like you can ignore the error.
Thanks for the heads up, deleted the dupe.