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Mmmm indeed... besides these things are just fictional, they aren't real... lol indeed to what AL said... if you don't like loli read the warnings tags

oh yeah... and why the hell wait... so yeah I'm on another computer that isn't mine... lol I am good at clearing my tracks, but anyways... yeah... I'm about a 2 or 3 weeks off to getting the rest of the money required for a new computer... thank gawd.... ugh... thing is... my computer didn't really die... the op system went and if I want to set my computer back up... my old computer... that is... I'd have to call dell to have them send me the disk... and well... I'd rather not do that... Fallen has reminded me how bad Dell customer service is through the use of youtube... but anyways... my old computer is outdated... and it's time I get a up to date one...  but enough rambling... so far... I'm surprised by the events in the chapters... the only negative note I have is to AL... you need to fix that thing with ya grammar and spelling... and yes I know...  you've probably heard that plenty of times that now it's annoying... but I'm a truthful person. As for other things so far I like what I have read, lots of things I like, heh... interesting situations the characters are being put through too, the only thing I'm shocked about is Suki, but what can you do  anyways... keep the good work up guys and I look forward to reading the new chapters soon... oh might I add I'm only one chapter 54 or so hehe  ;D

uhh... no kidding... man... I remember that all to well... the beginning of RPing was crazy... but yeah... it was bumpy to begin with, but that's how skills are built... you had those skills already... me... I had some skills but not enough to be considered a good RPer. I can say though I am happy in how this whole RP turned out, it's helped me develop my writing skills, considering I do want to become a novelist. (I'll post more details if anyone wishes to know more.) but anyways... the upcoming chapters I do hope everyone likes , though there are some parts others might not like... I urge others though to keep on reading to see the story develop more and more, don't shy away from reading the chapters even if they get negative ratings or reviews...

well Poowrite since you really didn't take to chapter 4 well... you should know I will be putting Drake through some torture later on in the series... as for they sounding evil or like villains, they aren't that's probably going to be the one time that happens, if my memory serves me right. Drake though, you'll see him develop a little more as the series goes on, so just keep watching  ;D You might like the results, as for all the sweatdrops and such... me and Fallen did these or the beginning of these chapters roughly months and months ago, my skill as an RPer has greatly improved since then so worry not... I try not to fit to many of those "sweatdrop" things in there to often

I completely agree, I'd have done the same thing if I was in your place

ARGH WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS SHIT!? I go away due to my computer dying on me and this shit happens... ugh... and masturbation is not what you say it is Jimmy... and I'm sorry but I'm agreeing with Fallen here cause he seems to make more sense... and his logic is more how should I say... sensible and logical! I talk to the guy everyday... and he makes more sense then I do sometimes... 

Yes I agree avatar is a good one to look at... my personal favorite if you haven't heard about it... is Fate/Stay Night, it's one anime that's stuck with me... and by far is isn't for kids with all the blood and stuff in it, it's kinda violent... but meh... heh... I'm just voicing a suggestion for an anime to look at if you haven't seen it already

it kinda made sense to me what you just said... fallen... then again... it's confusing and makes my head hurt a little  ;D

Ah yeah... lol there are a lot of details... I'm stubborn on that part majorly, if there aren't enough details I feel like I'm not satisfied with it. As for the many disclaimers... the warnings and what not with the many fetishes... lol my range of fetishes is large... though I shudder at the scat, and vomit parts... I endure it. You'll find the race of the main male character Drake is an interesting thing... I took a few aspects and names from something I was previously writing, A book and added it to this RPtoFic thing though this has different names and such and some info not in that, it's more like a parody of what my book is suppose to be. I'll have to write up my origins of Drake's race sometime... I've neglected to do so for a while now and thanks for reading guys, it's good to finally get some reviews about this

Guess what? I joined already lol I didn't even know about this place until you told me!  anyways... please read this guys... I as well want to know what you think of it... I'm always looking to improve my RPing skills and writing skills, I won't say much about the RP cause you gotta read it to get a real option on it.