I don't want to highjack Jimmy's thread, so I figured I'd make my own thread.
I only have one thing to report for now: those who have been reading my latest and newest series called 'The Popular Girl', a third chapters been added, and it has a little watersport action as well (wetting) ^_^
Why is my name Kimmy now? ???
>.< sorry, sometime 's my fingers hit the wrong key and I fail to notice
the third chapter of Scat fight has been added
I've uploaded a new avatar fic!
Tales of Ba Sing Sa: Toph's Desperation
http://nyou.autobotiacon.com/nf/viewstory.php?sid=211&warning=3
the third and final chapter of my 'For...' Code Lyoko series has been added, titled For Aelita.
chapters 66-75 of Rp 2 Fic: A New Life has been added
Updated my Love Hina series, 'Su's Horny Concoction' now includes Haruka's chapter
added a new chapter to my 'The popular girl' chapter 13 has no hot loli sex or yuri, but it has Shoujo-Ai. Basically a softcore, 'cute' and touching chapter.
enjoy
My first Final Fantasy X-2 fic, 'Who's Cuter' is done and posted
Reviewed it, but I have to say, it felt really rushed. I noted a lot of spelling errors and incorrect phrases here and there.
Hope you're not too upset, but then again better to be honest with one's opinion than sugarcoat it......Right? ???......Right?.. :012:
Don't worry, I'm not upset, not all my fics are going to be winners ^_^
It felt rushed? really? O_o I admit I was debating whether or not to have Selphie poop. I'm not really very happy with the end, plus there were other little bits of info and more of Selphie and Yuffie's verbal fight I wanted to add. I may edit in those changes later.
I'm also considering a sequel, Pooping while playing Blitzball anyone? ^_^
I also just had Fallenstar proofread the fic up to the pooping starts, so I will do another re-read later, find the mistakes i can, plus add other the changes then replace the current fic with the edited one sometime tommorrow
just like you guys to know that I've finished edit the fic, I've fixed the grammer and tenses and added a little more to the beginning and added content to the end of the fic, extending it about 2-3 more pages, I think
I wouldn't mind seeing a fic where Yuna poops during a Blitzball game. Though it'll be hard to figure out how to make it happen. Though if I remember right, the device that created the 'arena' made it so the water didn't get the people wet and also allowed them great mobility.
But it'd still be an interesting thing to see, a girl pooping herself underwater....
FUND IT!
Quote from: OrpheumZero on July 14, 2008, 01:36:50 AM
Though if I remember right, the device that created the 'arena' made it so the water didn't get the people wet and also allowed them great mobility.
I don't think that's true at all. I think you can get plenty wet in the Sphere Pool because Yuna talks about holding her breath in "Another Story" (I think that's what it's called) that was prior to FFX-2. And they do mention in FFX that the best blitzers "sleep underwater", plus a lot of the teams actually practice *in* water, so more than likely, the Sphere Pool is water too...
It would just be that blitzers can control pyreflies similar to summoners in order to regulate their breathing... :)
Chapter 15 has been added to my 'Popular Girl' series
chapters 83-96 of the 'RP2Fic: A New Life' have been added
Added two old pooping fics, 'Race Against Time' and a CCS fic called 'NPH'
Added my very first watersports fic, A Saikano 'The last Love Song on This Little Planet' fic, 'Chisa's Morning Urge'
Are you going to enter the story contest?
The one up next? I dunno, my next fic i thinking about is a Code Geass CC pooping fic, but I intended on it being a PWP fic, I've only seen the first 16 eps and all CC seems to do is stay at Lelouch's house, not much of a plot can be gained from that
I meant for the tough girl contest, since it's been extended.
I already did my entree for the 'tough girl contest' it's my Avatar Fic, 'One, then Two'
Oh. I forgot that was a contest entry.
At last, there is a Code Geass fic of CC pooping, titled, 'I Dream of Pizza'
Quote from: FallenStar on July 14, 2008, 02:44:36 AM
I don't think that's true at all. I think you can get plenty wet in the Sphere Pool because Yuna talks about holding her breath in "Another Story" (I think that's what it's called) that was prior to FFX-2. And they do mention in FFX that the best blitzers "sleep underwater", plus a lot of the teams actually practice *in* water, so more than likely, the Sphere Pool is water too...
It could very well be the sphere liquid or another liquid. Either way, if we're talking realistically the players couldn't breathe anyway (not that holding your breath for five minutes while playing an intense sport is realistic). And it's often to your advantage to train in harder conditions than you would normally ? take weight-training in combat arts, for example, or the practice of using a mouthpiece with a wider and deeper cup on a brass instrument while practicing most of the time (which makes it harder to play high notes and to produce a good tone), and a smaller, shallower one when performing. So if the water makes it harder to move around, the players will find themselves soaring in the sphere-liquid by comparison.
That's why still think the sphere device that creates the 'arena' makes it so that water doesn't have all the usual properties it does *I mean, the series is called Final Fantasy for many reasons :P) Though it does still leave the reason why Tidus, Wakka and Rikku are able to breathe underwater in other places (who knows, maybe people in Spira have some weird amphibious trait ???)
chapter 17 of my series, 'The Popular Girl' has been added
Chapter 19 Added to my series, 'The Popular Girl'
the final chapter to 'The Popular Girl' has been added!
Thank you all for your interest in it ^_^
geez I need to update this thread:
Chapter EX 1-4 added to The Popular Girl Series
Chapter 49 of My Life as A Succubus - Teachers like to Party Too
Tales of Woe- The Priceless Potty
Yuna's Blitzball Accident
Chapter 50 of My Life as A Succubus - Kaori's Dream
Chapter EX 5 added to The Popular Girl
Chapter EX 6 added to the Popular Girl
Chapters EX 7 and EX 8 added to the Popular Girl
Chapter EX 9 of the popular girl added
chapter EX 10 added to 'The Popular Girl'
Are chapters of "The Popular Girl" self-contained stories, or would I have to read the whole story to understand it?
you don't HAVE to read the first 'season' the EX chapters don't really have a solid story, and can be read starting from EX 1...
but, to give a short answer, yes, reading the previous fics would allow you to better understand future chapters
chapter EX 11 added to The Popular Girl
completed a new fic that ISN'T the popular girl :P
Tifa Vs. Zell
http://nyou.autobotiacon.com/nf/viewstory.php?sid=272
Chapter EX 12 added to The Popular Girl
chapter EX 13 added to The Popular Girl
Chapters EX 14, 15 and 16 added to the Popular Girl
Chapter EX 17 added to the Popular Girl
Started reposting my series, 'My Life As A Succubus' The eairly chapters are going to be edited to remove the 'wall 'o text'
chapters 1-8 have been posted
chapters 9-18 of 'My Life As A Succubus' posted
encase you guys are interested in knowing what chapters has ws or scat"
1. The Teacher 1 [WS/FD]
4. The Teacher 4 [WS] [SCAT] [FD]
7. Locker Room Desperation [WS/FD]
8. Karaoke [WS/FD]
12. Alex's Problem's [WS/FD]
13. The Tape [WS] [SCAT]
16. Holy Water [WS]
18. Lynn's Unfortunate Problem [WS] [SCAT]
A new fic 'ET-0001:Reeki' has been posted
Update to my Succubus series
19. The Plan
[WATERSPORT] [LOLICON] [liGHT BONDAGE] Chiyo-chan is invited to a classmates home, but her classmate only has 'wet' intentions in store for her...
20. Tomo's Embarasment
[LOLi] [WATERSPORTS] Tomo has to pee, but when Yukari falls asleep during class, can Tomo make it to the bell without ending up with really wet panties?
21. Footgasm
[LOLI] [MASTURBATION] [EGGS ] [FOOTPLAY] Alex's mother wants to meet her daughter's girlfriend and mother, they meet and the two adults seem to make it there mission to embarrass the two girls before they leave their parents.
22. It's All In The Mind
[LOLI] [FANTASY] the brain is a sex organ too yanno ^_^ BTW: this fic is a direct continuation of the 'Footgasm' fic
23. Teddy Bear and Wet Dreams
[LOLI] This fic continues immediately after the fic It's All In The Mind
I never asked you, AL, but did you want me to post that "My Life as a Succubus" rewrite that takes off from "We Won't Get Caught, Trust Me"?
I don't think you really liked me posting rewrites before, so that's why I'm asking now... o.o
as long as you point out that it's a rewrite of a fic thats not your own, I'm fine with it
Okay... I was just concerned you wouldn't want it up here... =)
EDIT: It's up now. If anyone reads it, please review.
Added chapter EX 18 to 'The Popular Girl'
Update to my Succubus series:
24. Tomo's First Lesbian Experience
[LOLI][BONDAGE][WATERSPORTS] With all my fics with my characters Lynn, Alex, Naki, etc, you may have noticed the names of a few characters from the anime. Well, they all go to the same school, and the Azumange crew has barely had any screen time so here's on for Tomo
25. When Boredom Strikes, the Pee Will Fly
[LOLI] [WATERSPORTS] Lynn and Alex have fun with three Azumanga Diaho characters ^_^
26. A Little Bite'
[LOLI] [BLOOD] After looking through a photo album of Lynn, Alex notices something odd about her and decides to ask Lynn about it...
27. Ayumu Kasuga
[SEX-RELATED SPEECH] Lynn goes to the the roof of the school for some freash air to find Kasuga there already, alone...
28. Feeding Time
[VIOLENCE] [BLOOD] After feeding on her mom for years, Lynn discovers that her mom's energy is weakening for her, but se doesn't want to feed on a human and especially not Alex...
29. Secret Admirer
[LOLI (HIGH-SCHOOL)] [YURI] [ANAL PLAY] I wanted to do a fic with my character's Lynn and Alex where Alex's sister finally meets Lillith, but the problem was the fic wouldn't have any 'action', but then i had an idea for Alex to find out she has a secret admirer, which would lead to 'action' so I combined the two fic ideas! hope ya like it.
30. Daddy's Little Girl's
[LOLI] [PEDO] [CONS] [M/F/F] This is another chapter to my Alex and Lynn fics, it's basically a flashback fic between Alex her sister and her dad, although Alex nor her sister makes any reference to an incestuous relationship with their dad in previous fics, it is there.
This fic also reveals an embarrassing phobia Alex has.
31. Daddy's Little Girl: Lynn
[LOLI (CLASSIC)] [PEDO] [RAPE] [ANAL] [M/F] [MURDER] Well heres the other half of the Alex/Lynn flashbacks. This fic explains why Lynn doesn't have a dad. despite the last tag, it's not as graphic as you'd think
chapter EX 19 of The Popular Girl Added
Update to my succubus series
32. Payback's A Bit*h
(REALISTIC) [LOLI (YURI)] [BITING] [FEMALE DESPERATION (WATERSPORTS)] As eluded in the fic, 'Secret Admirer', in this fic, Lynn, Alex and there new friend Yuu force one of there other friends, Amy, to get a taste of her own medicine ^_^
33. A Little Role-Play
(REALISTIC) [LOLI(HIGH-SCHOOL)] [YURI(YOUNG/OLD)] [ROLE-PLAY] [DIAPERS] [SCAT] [WATERSPORTS] [FUTANARI] this is the fic that Alex hinted at in the fic "Payback's A Bit*h'"
34. Not Quite
(ANIME) [LOLI (HIGH-SCHOOL)] [WATERSPORTS]
Alex doesn't make it home quick enough...
35. Alex?s First Erotic Asphyxiation Experience
(ANIME) [LOLI (HIGH-SCHOOL)] [EROTIC ASPHYXIATION] [YURI] [TOILET WATERSPORTS and SCAT]
Alex discovers a shocking act that Lynn and her mom like to do
36. Changes and Party
(ANIME) [LOLI] (CLASSIC & HIGH-SCHOOL) [BITING] [WATERSPORTS] [SCAT] [DIAPER-PLAY]
Lynn discovers herself changing, hey, at least it was at home
Suzan offers Lynn a pizza party with her friends, which quickly turn into a wet compitition.
37. Make Me Squirt Please
[REALISTIC] [LOLI] (HIGH-SCHOOL) [YURI]
Lynn receives a call from her friend Sarah about an 'embarrassing' problem
38. Cutie's Sick!
[LOLI] [YURI]
It's almost winter and When Lynn comes home from school alone, her mom wonders why Alex (Cutie) isn't with her...
39. Snow! It's Snow!
[NONE]
ALice See's snow for the first time
40. No Luck For Alex
[LOLI] (HIGH-SCHOOL) [YURI] [INCEST] [ANAL]
Alex doesn't seem to be a very lucky girl in winter...
Chapter EX 20 of The Popular Girl posted.
thank-you all for reading ^_^
Does that mean you're through with the Popular Girl series? O.o
That's one of your longer running series, I have to admit...
not yet, if you take a gander at my sig, you'd see 'The Popular Girl SP 1' it'll be a sort of 3 or 4 part mini-series that stars a different character in a different setting and gives a sorta closure to the entire series
Right... my bad.. Oh well...
Also, to those who read the EX series, if you have a request of something you'd like to see, post it and I might do it
Update to my Succubus series
41. Animal's Like Me!
(ANIME) LOLI (HIGH-SCHOOL), SLIGHT RAPE, IMPREGNATION and BIRTH
Alex decides to visit Naki and gets WAY more than she bargained for...
42. Silky Smooth
LOLI (HIGH-SCHOOL), MILD VIOLENCE, YURI, MASTURBATION, PEEING, FOOD
After a traumatic event at Sarah's house, Alex finds out Suzan has yet another surprise for her 'Cutie' ^_^
43. Alex and Mr. Tadakichi
LOLI (CLASSIC and HIGH-SCHOOL), BEASTIALITY
Alex likes animals, she REALLY likes animals; and that of course causes a problem to arise...
44. Alex and the Dream Realm
[MILD VIOLENCE]
After discovering that Alex and Lynn are suddenly experiencing double vision, Suzan recruits Alex to save a world from disappearing, but can she?
45. Birthday Girls: Allie
[LOLI] [ORGY] [YURI]
A day after Christmas, it's Alex's and Allie's 17th birthday, part one of two, Lilith Joins the party and decides to give Allie a present she won't soon forget
46. Birthday Girls: Alex
[LOLI] [YURI]
A day after Christmas, it's Alex's and Allie's 17th birthday, part two of two, Lilith Joins the party and decides to give Allie a present she won't soon forget
47. End of the Year
(ANIME) LOLI, YURI
It's nearly the end of the year and Alex wants to start the new year with no secrets between her and Lynn, but how will Lynn take the shocking news?
48. Karaoke: Redux
(ANIME) [LOLI] [YURI] [WATERSPORTS]
Lynn is once again invited to Karaoke by Alex, with the promise of not having to sing, joins, along with Tomo, Chiyo-chan and Lilith.
But Karaoke isn't the only thing planned...
49. Teacher's Like to Party Too
(ANIME) [YURI] [ANAL]
While Lynn, Alex, Tomo and Chiyo enjoy themselves, this chapter depicts what happens around the same time with Nyamo, her calm day doesn't stay so calm when two drunk friends arrive at her door...
50. Kaori's Dream
(ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), YURI, ANAL
school Swimsuit chapter! At long last!
Ahem, anyway, Lynn spots Kaori 'admiring' Sakaki once again and decides to confront her about it ^_^
NEW 51. Posing For Pictures
(ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), YURI, SOFTCORE
Lynn and Alex discover one of Alex's art classmates wants them to pose for a drawing
The Popular Girl SP 1 has been added
SP 3 added
What's your plan for the FFX-2 Garnet fic? O.o
Also is that Princess Garnet Til Alexandros the 17th from FFIX? (just checkin' 'cause sometimes, there are characters I don't quite remember from some FF games. ??? )
Also, shy sub Yuna FTW!! <.< >.> *runs*
all I have planned for the Garnet fic (yes, THAT Garnet AKA Dagger) is that, Garnet is On the Celcius (however it's spelled) and she needs to used the bathroom, I haven't decided whether it's a pee or pooping need, probably both, and I haven't decided if the bathroom will already be occupied or if one of the girl's on the airship, teases her body until she loses it.
So, the only plan for Garnet is that I want her her to pee or poop herself wearing that formfitting bodysuit she wears on the Celcius.
And I don't quite understand the Yuna comment O_o
I see.
And Yuna's kinda the "shy sub" princess type in FFX until Seymour starts screwing around (pun not intended) with her... In a few regards, she seems more like Suki than any other Final Fantasy character (even more so than Garnet whose will and outspokenness far surpass what Suki does and ten times as much as Eiko, who comes off as a little brat more than a shy kid)...
Basically, I was saying that a shy submissive Yuna is my favorite type of Yuna =P
added a new fic that isn't a popular girl charter! and it's a watersport themed fic! O_O
go read it! ^_^
NEVAAAAAAA!!!!
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Wait... I already read some of it. Same grammar issues as always, dude. I suggest going to Slvan learning center or your local high school and looking up after school spelling courses.
Other than your grammar, though, your style is kickass and win - and I don't think anyone can deny that you are the most prolific author here or even on Flatchan and Palcomix. Keep up the good work and work on your grammar and spelling and you'll be good to go. =)
Quote from: FallenStar on February 24, 2009, 08:53:01 PM
NEVAAAAAAA!!!!
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Wait... I already read some of it. Same grammar issues as always, dude. I suggest going to Slvan learning center or your local high school and looking up after school spelling courses.
Other than your grammar, though, your style is kickass and win - and I don't think anyone can deny that you are the most prolific author here or even on Flatchan and Palcomix. Keep up the good work and work on your grammar and spelling and you'll be good to go. =)
*Sad sack from Charlie Brown/Arrested Development plays* But what about me? I do a lot of stuff here as well.... *Slumps head and walks down street*
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:P Just kidding, but yea, AL certainly is the leading man on the site when it comes to most stories, views, reviews, etc...
Any plans to enter Story Contest XIII?
I can't belive I haven't uploaded my first series with Egg-laying, 'The Fantasy World of Merkolova'! O_O I started it in 2005, but it takes place 200 years AFTER 'The Popular Girl', So it's almost completely different from The Popular Girl.
READ IT!
^_^
I was a little surprised you wrote a 20,000 word novella so quickly. ;)
heh, well, I have done so many fics, I missed posting the older ones on this site
I haven't even posted one of my older scat (diarria) fics here yet
'Race Against Time' posted
it's the fic I mentioned
You've already posted "Race Against Time."
1. http://nyou.autobotiacon.com/nf/viewstory.php?sid=288
2. http://nyou.autobotiacon.com/nf/viewstory.php?sid=239
ah, ok, I deleted it
Chapter 52 of my Succubus Series, 'The Kaori/Sakaki Enigma'
has been posted
Any chance you'll write a chapter/spinoff involving diapers? I'd really like to get this contest rolling, in the spirit of increasing activity here.
I currently have no plans to make a 'new' fic with diapers, although, in my succubus series, Alex likes wearing and messing them and has a special re-useable pair from Lynn's mom, so if i did do a diaper fic, it would likely be a chapter of my succubus series, I just have no ideas atm
Probably stupid to re-open old wounds, but...
You've always talked about how rough Kim was treated as a younger girl... how about a Kim "pee-rape" fic from when she was a bit younger? :)
Okay, well if you do have an idea, don't hesitate to share the resulting fic.
Oh, and what do you think of Teesle's Lucky Star challenge? Anything you'd be interested in writing up?
you mean the one with Konata using a diaper in her gaming?
yeah, I actually thought about doing a fic based on the pic s/he was talking about.
I just haven't gotten around to doing it.
I still haven't did my Yutaka/Minami fic yet >_<
Yeah, the diapered gaming. That could be a fun fic to read.
My Life as A Succubus
54. The Kaori/Sakaki Enigma: Redux
Final Fantasy X-2: Crossover
4. Warmth [WS]
Original
Craptastic Can Be A Good thing! [SCAT]
My Life as A Succubus
54. A Touchie Evening [WS]
Lucky Star
A Gamer's Dedication [WS] [DIAPER] [Teesle challenge] [Story contest]
I posted my review, and if you're wondering why it ends so abruptly, that's because I accidentally cut off the end. But there's nothing in the conclusion that isn't just summing up what's in the rest of the review. Great job!
21st EX chapter added to the popular girl
(ANIME) [LOLI] [WATERSPORTS] [SEVERE DISCIPLINARY ACTION]
Sakura learns the downside of having two sets of parents when she, like any other teenager, tries going behind there backs to do something she's not allowed...
22nd EX chapter added to the popular girl
(ANIME) [LOLI (FAIRY)] [WATERSPORTS] [SCAT] [YURI]
A brief look back to Nina's life before meeting Sakura.
23rd EX chapter added to The Popular Girl
(ANIME) [LOLI] [VIOLENCE] [SHOUJO-AI]
Her arm just healed and Sakura can't wait to get back into the ring, will she fair better this time?
24th EX chapter added to The Popular Girl
(ANIME) [LOLI] [SHOTA] [YAOI] [MASTURBATION] [ORAL] [ANAL] [GANG-BANG]
Sakura, the girl who once swore off boys, gazes at a sight she NEVER thought she'd see...
NOTE: I've been wanting to do a chapter like this with Sakura for awhile now (not the Yaoi part) and i finally got around to doing it ^_^
25th EX chapter added to The Popular Girl
(ANIME) [LOLI] [ORAL] [YURI] [SCAT (DEFECATION)] [WATERSPORTS (FORCED)]
Sakura wants to share a particular fetish she has with her Lovey-Dovey
It's shocking to me how little Sakura's major fetish has appeared in this series >_<
Found this on the e-hentai site, thought you might get a kick out of it, Anime Lover. It does seem close to something you'd probably write.
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/105191/a1fc12f419/
lol, maybe if it was cum instead of poop, but that was quite lol-worthy ^_^
Quote from: Anime Lover on April 23, 2009, 01:32:16 AM
lol, maybe if it was cum instead of poop, but that was quite lol-worthy ^_^
Certainly a crazy idea for girls pooping massively.
New Fic
A Ginormica Mess
probably the first Monsters Vs. Aliens fic ^_^
26th EX chapter added to The Popular Girl
(ANIME) [LOLI] [VIOLENCE]
Another day of Shakra sparring and Sakura happily discovers another change in her body...
27th EX chapter added to The Popular Girl
(ANIME) [LOLI] [ORAL] [YURI] [EGG-LAYING]
After a little 'celebrating', Sakura and Nina meet a new Fiser, though Nina doesn't seem very happy meeting the new face...
NOTE: I intended to include sex in the last chapter, but didn't manage to fit it in, so this chapter makes up for that ^_^
I was just skimming the chapter of "My Unusual Girlfriend" that you just posted, and it looks interesting. Is Chapter 1 the only part with self-pleasuring? If so, I'll read and review the other 3.
yeah, the first chapter is the only one with masturbation, and it's male masturbation (the entire story is told from the guys prospective)
Cool. Expect a review tomorrow or later today.
29th EX chapter added to The Popular Girl
(ANIME) [LOLI] [YURI] [INCEST] [WATERSPORTS]
Just some good'ol mother/daughter incest
Here's one of those pictures I was talking about: http://www.phantom-inker.com/art/view.php?agree=1&agree_category=sex&img=showoff&agree=YES%21++I+AGREE%21
All his PG-13 art can be seen here: http://phantom-inker.deviantart.com/gallery/ Type "octopus" into the search to see the Terra-like girls.
My Unusual Girlfriend used the Scylla pic on this Site: http://www.akeiarkay.com/myeh/scylla.html
I see now. But you can see why I thought it was from Phantom Inker's art (especially the "girls don't have beaks" picture).
30th EX chapter of The Popular Girl added
(ANIME) [LOLI] [YURI] [SCAT (TOILET/FORCED)] [INCEST]
A day after being forced to wet herself by her girlfriend, Lila tries coming up with an idea to get back at Sakura, but... maybe she goes too far...
Since you wrote a review to the first chapter of my latest fic, I'm wondering what you thought of the rest of it. If you have a spare moment, I'd really appreciate it if you wrote a review of the story overall. :kawaii:
On a completely different subject, are you sure you won't continue "My Unusual Girlfriend?" I'd love to see (read) a cat-fight between Terra and Alexandria. ^-^
On another completely different subject, I think you want to edit your signature. It looks like there's a little typo in there.
well I haven't gotten around to reading the rest of the chapters, sorry, this monitor of mine is dying and makes reading stuff a headache (literally >_<) I'll read it though, don't worry
Good to know. :)
What do you think about an extension to "My Unusual Girlfriend?" Am I just annoying you by bringing it up so much?
I have no plans to continue 'My Unusual Girlfriend', which is why I made it a Round Robin Fic, others can add to it if they want
Brandy and Mr. Whiskers?! O_o;
Interesting choice, lol
Brandy's Hot, your just now realising that? ;D :P
I still haven't did that lucky star fic yet though >_<
Quote from: Anime Lover on June 22, 2009, 06:43:16 PM
Brandy's Hot, your just now realising that? ;D :P
I still haven't did that lucky star fic yet though >_<
I tell ya... you and JAB should hook up; he draws the pics of American toons and you do the fanfiction. xD
So would it be all right if I write the next chapter of "My Unusual Girlfriend?" I just whipped up a quick plot outline while eating my dinner, so I can send it to you for your approval before I start the actual writing.
fine by me, even if I did decide to continue it in the future, I'd just continue from were I left off.
though it would be interesting to see what other people come up with ^_^
Here's my plot for the next chapter. If you're okay with it, I should probably be able to post it finished within the next couple days.
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David realizes once he sees Alexandria naked that he was never all that interested in having sex with her. He just wanted to have sex with someone. Now that he has had sex, he can think more clearly about his relationship with Alexandria. The two have never been a real couple. She's never called him her boyfriend, and has always kept him at arm's length, even though she's clearly attracted to him. Besides their occasional fooling around, they've never done anything except hang out as if they were just friends. What's more, she's gone on dates with other guys, and David never made a fuss. So why is it such a big deal to her that he had sex with Terra? After thinking about this, David tells the naked Alexandria that he has no commitment to her, and that his penis is free to act on its own accord. She is furious, but takes her anger out on Terra instead of him. Terra fights back, and shows the scrawny girl a thing or two about fighting. But Alexandria's hatred of Terra is intense, and so is her desire to prove herself to David, and so she doesn't go down gently.
The cat-fight comes to a pause when Alexandria bites a tentacle that's wrapped around her head and accidentally bites off and swallows the tip. The human girl is worried about what swallowing a Scylle's tentacle will do to her. Terra says it's no big deal, but Alexandria looks more and more sickly as the chapter goes on. Terra also reveals that tentacle-biting is common in fights and horseplay among Scylle, and tells a story about a vicious fight she got into with her mother where she ended up biting off and spitefully gulping down a foot-long chunk of one of her mother's tentacles. The tentacle was wearing a pretty ring her mother had "found," and so she made her daughter stay home for days until she pooped it out. This raises the subject that Scylle can eat many things that humans can't. David gets worried that she'll swallow his parents' valuables as a way of stealing them, and warns her that he'll poison her and make her throw up if she ever does that. Terra thinks that's an idle threat, but when David opens the medicine cabinet for her she's horrified to see the many "poisons" that are in there, and gets the impression that David's parents are assassins who poison people for a living. She promises not to eat anything she isn't supposed to. Alexandria is laying in David's bed all this time, worrying about the swallowed tentacle.
David is disappointed that the neato naked cat-fight has stopped, so he makes the false claim that whichever girl wins in the fight will be his girlfriend, and so the cat-fight resumes, with even more intensity. But Alexandria finally backs down when she opens up the wound on Terra's chest. She's really mad at Terra, but there's still a flash of genuine concern in her eyes. She says they'll rematch a few days later, once Terra gets her strength back. David reveals that the cat-fight had no real meaning, but they still obviously want to fight each other. He tells Alexandria about the misgivings he has about their whole relationship. She vows to prove her love one way or another, and leaves.
Terra says Alexandria is right. Her injuries aren't life-threatening, but they have weakened her greatly, and she will need to eat and drink more than usual these next couple days in order to replace all the blood she lost. She also has to regenerate several tentacles, and that mass has to come from somewhere, too. David gives her the baloney sandwich, and amazingly Terra thinks it's the best thing she's eaten for months. David decides to impress her by making spaghetti, which Terra sucks up and enjoys with almost sexual intensity. She's still hungry, and he decides to just let her eat stuff that doesn't need to be prepared. So she pigs out. David even offers her something that isn't really food as a joke, but she happily wolfs it down to his surprise. She has him make her shakes with rock salt in them to get her body salt content back up. He's not crazy about all this, but figures it's a small price to pay to keep a nymphomaniac happy and close to him.
Terra overstuffs herself and lays around for a while complaining that she's overstuffed. Eventually she moans that she thinks she needs to visit "the waste-releasing chair" again, and gets up to travel there. David isn't sure if she needs to poop, pee, or throw up, but whatever the case he won't let her in the bathroom unless she performs a sexual favor for him. He's had some time to rest since the last time, and now he's ready for more. She resists, to his surprise. Despite her innate horniness, she's too full right now to be horny. But David remains steadfast: no sex, no toilet. To be continued.
Interesting, the Alexandra/Terra 'cat-fight' thing was a little much IMO, given that Alexandra never showed physical hostility to Terra.
Quote"...as if they were just friends."
David and Alexandra ARE friends, childhood friends actually, that like to fool around with each other. so you could say their friends with benifits.
regardless though, nice outline and I'm glad someones interested enough in my story to make there own chapter 5 ^_^
Cool, I wasn't sure you'd be okay with so many of my elements there. As for the cat-fight, I suppose I could make it more realistic by having Terra say a bunch of stuff to provoke Alexandra, which would lead to the fight. Alexandra already called her a "thing," so there must be at least some antagonism there. Regardless, I really want them to fight. I find it exciting when girls fight (or play-fight) in real life.
Quote from: Anime Lover on June 22, 2009, 07:56:03 PMDavid and Alexandra ARE friends, childhood friends actually, that like to fool around with each other. so you could say their friends with benifits.
Yeah, that's what I got from your writing. That's why I think David would think Alexandra had no business being jealous.
QuoteYeah, that's what I got from your writing. That's why I think David would think Alexandra had no business being jealous.
Lol, well one of her long-time friends who's virginity she's been trying to claim has suddenly gone to a stranger he just met. I dunno about where you live, but Girl's like to go after guys who are still virgins. plus there the idea of wanting something you're denied, so it's a double whammy deal for Alexandra, a male 17 friend who's a virgin and tells her she can't have it ^_^
Honestly, I've always tried to go after girls who plan to remain abstinent until marriage, so I don't really know how it goes with horny girls like Alexandra. :-[
It's been a week now since I said my chapter would be posted in a couple days, so I'm sorry about the lack of progress. I've been pretty busy. For the past few days I've been working frantically on my novel, because a girl told me she wants to read it. And right now I'm "cramming" for a job interview tomorrow. But it would be a lie to say I've had no time in which to write the chapter, since I spent much of yesterday watching clips from Duck Tales on Youtube. I just haven't been managing my time excellently. But my contribution to "My Unusual Girlfriend" should be up soon with no problem. The same goes for my "deleted scene" from Sailor Moon episode 108.
it's ok, you don't have to rush it or anything.
Though, i am intrigued how you'll do your version of the 5th chapter since there's been stuff in the previous chapters that you don't like.
from the sexual nature of my chapters (at least the first 3), I'm guessing yours would tone down on the sexual stuff
There's going to be some sexuality but no actual sex. My aims here are character interaction and humor. Oh, and painting a picture in words of 2 attractive girls fighting each other. ;)
31th EX chapter of The Popular Girl added
(ANIME) [LOLI] [YURI] [EROTIC MESSAGE]
Sakura is invited to a Merkolovian Spa. Everyone likes the pleasure of messages and Sakura receives one she won't soon forget...
I think you mean "massage." ;)
32nd EX chapter of The Popular Girl added
(ANIME) [LOLI]
Just a short chapter I managed to do in a day ^_^
Sakura discovers one of the least bragged about things that come with puberty...
33rd EX chapter of The Popular Girl added
(ANIME) [LOLI] [MILD VIOLENCE]
Thanks to Lila, Sakura and Lila's relationship hits their first big bump...
TWO new chapters this time added to The Popular Girl
(well I just split one chapter in two)
Chapter EX 34
(ANIME) [LOLI] [YURI] [POSSIBLE DISTURBING IMAGES]
After waking from a disturbing dream, Sakura faces an unsettling fact...
Chapter EX 35
(ANIME) [LOLI] [YURI] [EGG-LAYING] [MILD VIOLENCE] [WATERSPORTS] [SCAT]
Excited with her first school Field Trip on Merkolova, Sakura receives a very surprising gift from Nina...
36th EX chapter added to the popular girl
(ANIME) LOLI, YURI RAPE
Breaking up is rarely ever easy...
37th EX chapter added to the popular girl
(ANIME) [LOLI] [SHOTA] [THREESOME] [ANAL] [STRAIGHT SEX] [ORAL]
While Lila still feels bad for what she did and the break-up, Sakura herself seems completely over it, in more ways than one...
38th EX Chapter of the popular girl added
(ANIME) [LOLI] [POSSIBLE DISTURBING IMAGING] [VIOLENCE] [INCEST] [SOFTCORE YURI]
Rumors travel fast, and Merkolovian schools are no different...
I guess all this interest in the Popular Girl means you won't be doing anything with Classic Lynn and Classic Alex/Sarah/Amy, huh?
I used to really enjoy classic Sarah and Amy... even in non-FD situations.
Ah, well... when I get my computer fixed, I suppose I oughta read some of these chapters, lol
when you say 'classic', then you already know the answer, I've talked to you about this before.
I haven't done anything new with my succubus series because I'm fresh out of idea's for that series
I know the answer; I was just trying to say that if you had done anything new with those characters, I would've probably read fics on them... simply because they are classics to me.
I like them more than I do Sakura, in other words. <.< >.>
ah, I see, 'classic' in the since that your already familiar with them
Quote from: Anime Lover on September 17, 2009, 06:32:59 PM
ah, I see, 'classic' in the since that your already familiar with them
Well, put it this way... I've been reading Locker Room Desperation, We Won't Get Caught, Trust Me, and that fic of yours where Lynn and Alex challenged Amy and Sarah to a hold it contest and I find those fics a lot more enjoyable than your Popular Girl series simply because I liked the characters better. I don't know what it was but something about Sakura just never clicked with me and her Cerick only intensified that dislike. The fact that Lynn's a succubus never seemed to impact her, though I really enjoyed how long she could hold it (at least, in that first fic with the teacher).
I should also admit that your scene where Sarah rubs Lynn's black dress up against her naked pussy is something I've liked so much that I've had Suki do that in one of my RPs. I think you really have talent at setting up scenes. Far more than me, at any rate. =P
again, the cerick hardly even appears in the series. I don't know why your letting somthing that rarely show up effect your liking of a character
QuoteThe fact that Lynn's a succubus never seemed to impact her,
Are you KIDDING ME!? Seriously!? The series is called 'My Life as a
SUCCUBUS', there are chapters where Lynn being a succubus is the focus! Maybe you should read the chapter 'Kicked Out' again, where it's revealed that she resents being born a succubus and was nearly willing to cut off her wings, or maybe 'Feeding Time', where Lynn attacks Alex because of her succubus needs. Then there's the chapter 'Changes and Party' where Lynn is forced to reluctantly feed on a young loli virgin in order to be able to hide her new, larger wings.
There are PLENTY references to Lynn being a Succubus in this series.
QuoteI should also admit that your scene where Sarah rubs Lynn's black dress up against her naked pussy
What chapter was that? I don't remember it
First of all, Lynn's being a succubus was never so far against my likes that it ruined her character for me the way Sakura's egg-laying and cerick did. Secondly, yes, I did read Kicked Out and the chapter where Lynn fed on Alex - quit acting as though I'm an idiot who hasn't read any of your fics. >_>' What I was trying to say is that I still liked Lynn and I don't like Sakura.
As for the chapter, I don't have the original title - I think it made have started with Alex and Lynn in bed, but I won't swear to it. The main focus of what I read (and enjoyed) was Lynn and Alex trying to best Sarah and Amy at a hold it contest - Karaoke, I think, might have been the title, now I think on it...
39th EX chapter added to the popular girl
(ANIME) [LOLI] [VIOLENCE] [POSSIBLE DISTURBING IMAGING] [BLOOD] [INCEST] [M/g ORAL]
Sakura attempts to help Lila by talking her mom down from 'killing her'. but unfortunately for Lila, it backfires, severely.
Later, at home, Sakura discovers her moms acting strange...
WARNING: This is an extreme chapter, that by today's standers, contains what is clearly child abuse/torture, verging on (or is) gurochan-level.
=_=
First you say you want me to read this chapter, then you go and put all these warnings on it? What makes you even dare to think I'd be interested in this? Now if it were something softcore, maybe... but... I don't share your love for Guro, my friend. (unless it's drowning, and that seems to freak you out... go figure... >_> )
What's a cerick? ???
Quote from: FallenStar on September 23, 2009, 12:15:43 AM
=_=
First you say you want me to read this chapter, then you go and put all these warnings on it? What makes you even dare to think I'd be interested in this? Now if it were something softcore, maybe... but... I don't share your love for Guro, my friend. (unless it's drowning, and that seems to freak you out... go figure... >_> )
I didn't say I want you to read the newest chapter >_< there is a different between me asking you to read a chapter and simply informing you that a new one has been done. The reason I told you a new chapter was done was because it's the 39th chapter, one away from 40.
Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on September 23, 2009, 01:39:57 AM
What's a cerick? ???
In this series, a Cerick is a prehensile tentacle formed from a girl's Cervix. The word 'Cerick' is simply the combination of the two words 'Cervix' and 'dick'. I couldn't think of any better Name for it, and the main character of this series actually comments on that fact ^_^; anyway, in this seris, only the Hybrid girls have a Cerick, and it's simply a result of the mixed DNA and a Cerick's, primary purpose is the girl to girl fertilization of eggs (NOT impregnation fertilization), the type that changes the egg or eggs in the chosen girl into a form where the eggs can be cracked open and the insides consumed. Male Tragalian sperm can also do this, but the egg but be immideatly removed to prevent impregnation.
Both of these scenarios have happened at least once in this series. Eairly in season one, Lila fertilizes Sakura's eggs, who later lays them and cracks them open to drink the fluid from them. in season two, Sakura gets too into having sex with her Merkolovian father and let's him come inside her when she has an egg in her, but Nina prevents her from becoming pregnant when she pushes the eggs from her body and Sakura's dad cracks the egg to have Sakura's drink it's content
Quote from: Anime Lover
I didn't say I want you to read the newest chapter >_< there is a different between me asking you to read a chapter and simply informing you that a new one has been done. The reason I told you a new chapter was done was because it's the 39th chapter, one away from 40.
Why would it matter what chapter it is? It's not really as though I'm going to read any of it anyway, so what's the point? ???
well it's kind of a milestone IMO, the series I like so much, the second season of it is reaching the 40th chapter.
you probably don't understand since you haven't done any long running series.
It's a special feeling ^_^
Quote from: Anime Lover on September 23, 2009, 10:50:40 AM
well it's kind of a milestone IMO, the series I like so much, the second season of it is reaching the 40th chapter.
you probably don't understand since you haven't done any long running series.
It's a special feeling ^_^
I can only say that I've wanted to do a long-running series but I can never get started, lol.
My old Sailor Moon/Dragonball Z crossover fic would have been HUGE, but I barely got into one half of a chapter before I quit and now... now, I realize just how stupid the whole concept was.
Speaking of Sailor Moon, would you mind reviewing my contest entry?
Finally! Chapter EX 40 is here!
Wow, another set of 20 chapters done.
and this is the longest one, measuring in at 29 pages.
(ANIME) [LOLI] [COMPETITIVE VIOLENCE] [M/g] [ORAL]
Sakura turns fifteen and she's not even aware of it! The party truly is a surprise, with a gift from Lila she never would have expected! Also, still wondering why Reni goes after Jillian so much? or how about Amu's love interest, will she finally confess to him?
[spoiler]do you sense it? that feeling of closure, or something close to it? well it's no coincidence. for all intents and purposes, this is the last chapter of the series. Although, I will be making a short, bonus chapter soon, to finally close the series.
here is it, the final chapter of The Popular Girl series, or at the very least, the end of Sakura's story.
Chapter EX 41 - The (New) Popular Girl
(ANIME) [LOLI]
There's a new girl at school, and she's not quite like everyone else...
The Popular Girl N is here!
the official sequel to my well-like popular girl series
Sakura's story is over, now begins Alma's story, who was intro'd in the 41st chapter of the EX series.
Alma's story isn't all 'peaches n cream' like Sakura's though.
(ANIME) LOLI, VIOLENCE (MURDER), NON-CONSENSUAL SEX, MASTURBATION
Sequel to the popular 'Popular Girl' series. New girl, new story.
3 new chapters added to the popular girl N
N 2 - (ANIME) [LOLI] [SURPRISE SEX] [M/f INCEST(?)]
N 3 - (ANIME) LOLI
N 4 - (ANIME) [LOLI] [YURI] [F/f] [INCEST(?)]
3 new chapters added to the popular girl N
N 5 - (ANIME) [LOLI] [YURI] [M/f] [f/f] [INCEST(?)] [NON-CONSENSUAL]
Lina learns from her sister and delicious twincest ensues!
N 6 - (ANIME) [LOLI] [M/f] [INCEST(?)]
You can forgive, but it doesn't mean you have to forget...
N 7 - (ANIME) [LOLI] [SOFTCORE] [YURI] [INCEST] [M/f] [RAPE]
It's time for Alma's first real client, is it a success? Failure? Read and find out! ^_^ Back-story completes with his chapter.
5 new chapters added to The Popular Girl N
N 8 - (ANIME) LOLI, SOFTCORE TWINCEST, VIOLENCE, YURI
Alma and Lina move to a new home in preparation for Alma attending school.
N 9 - (ANIME) [LOLI]
Days before Alma's first day of school, each sister get's a happy surprise.
N 10 (EX 41 v.2) - (ANIME) [LOLI] [PARANORMAL] [YURI ECCHI]
Alma's first day of school starts a little lonely, but she soon meets a friendly girl who becomes her first friend, leading her to many more, and maybe, even her first crush...
N 11 (EX 42) - (ANIME) [LOLI] [ECCHI] [INCEST] [MASTURBATION] [COMEDIC VIOLENCE] [PARANORMAL] [YURI] [f/M]
Two sides reflect on the other, and Alma learns why Lina's attracted to Sakura.
N 12 (EX 43) - (ANIME) LOLI, YURI, BONDAGE, MILD S&M, FEMALE DESPERATION (WATERSPORTS)
A vision of things to come?
N 13 (EX 44) - (ANIME) [LOLI] [YURI] [M/f RAPE] [VIOLENCE]
An innocent conversation with one of her new friends, Sakura, raises an unsettling suspicion in Alma about her father and possible situation... Meanwhile, Lina finally meets her crush... sort of...
2 new chapters added to The Popular Girl N
N 14 - (ANIME) [LOLI] [VIOLENCE] [MILD YURI INCEST]
Alma learns the truth and the story reaches it's climax.
N 15 (EX 45) - (ANIME) [LOLI] [ECCHI] [YURI INCEST] [DEFLOWERING]
A night's sleep after learning the truth, Alma's nearly all smiles again, except for one worrying thought; Then, she questions Sakura about something she finds very interested. Later, Alma discovers the pleasure of vaginal penetration.
New chapter added to the popular girl N
N 16 (EX 45) - (ANIME) LOLI, YURI, TWINCEST, THREE-SOME
Sakura visits Alma and Lina, MUCH to Lina's glee, embarrassment and pleasure.
this chapter also has a small forced farting scene
added 2 notes chapters to the popular girl
their not needed to be read, their just something extra
2 new chapters added to the popular girl
N 17 (EX 47) - (ANIME) LOLI, PARANORMAL
Sakura meets the third sister.
N 18 - (ANIME) LOLI, YURI, PARANORMAL, f/F INCEST, MILD PEE/SCAT (TOILET), M/f INCEST, M/f/F INCEST
The day after, while Alma's at school, Lina's healing becomes complete, allowing Hailey to use her body and the mystery of why the spectral girl is there is finally revealed, which brings Lina a very unwelcome 'upgrade'.
1 new chapter added to the popular girl N
N 19 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), MILD VIOLENCE, M/f, ORAL
On the first day of the weekend, Alma is informed of her first of many, Client Meetings since discovering her purpose, much to her excitement and eagerness. How will it turn out?
also, I've noticed an error when posting the last 5 or so updates, an error page would come up and althogh my update would be added, the fic wouldn't be registered as being updated, thus, not bumped up to the top. and the updates doesn't seem to give Nyou points
new fic
it's the Brandy and Mr. Whiskers fic I've been wanting to do
[WATERSPORTS]
Brandy get's lost on her way home while nature calls, and if that wasn't bad enough, Whiskers is with her...
1 new chapter added to the popular girl N
N 20 (EX 48) - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), ECCHI
Paid for her afternoon of fun, Alma does what any other Merkolovian teen does when they have money- Go shopping with friends!
1 new chapter added to the popular girl N
N 21 (EX 49) - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), WATERSPORTS
By Sakura's suggestion, Alma tries out the fetish of pee-play in a controlled, planned method, however...
1 new chapter added to The Popular Girl N
N 22 (EX 50) - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), EGG-LAYING, MILD PEE/SCAT, GRAPHIC IMAGERY(?)
The time for Sakura to lay the egg that contains her sister has finally come. And later, after a successful operation, Lina learns more about her creation.
1 new chapter added to The Popular Girl N
N 23 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), WINCEST, YURI, ORAL, ANAL, TENTACLE, SCAT
Creating loli's from scratch isn't the only thing created in the Advance Technologies Research and Testing Facility (ATTF) and Alma get's a very 'hands-on' experience with the latest creation.
5 new uploads to The popular Girl N
2 info files:
Shakra notes 2 and Cast of Characters
3 new chapters:
N 24 (EX 51) - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), VIOLENCE, ANAL, TENTACLE, SCAT
After her first official IPSL match since birthing her egg, Sakura, Lina and their friends get a call from a very happy Alma.
N 25 (EX 52) - (ANIME) LOLI (CLASSIC & NYMPH), MASTURBATION, YURI, M/f INCEST
A wish is finally granted that brings lovers back together.
N 26 - (ANIME) LOLI (CLASSIC & NYMPH), MASTURBATION, YURI, M/f INCEST
A wish is finally granted that brings lovers back together.
one new chapter added to The Popular Girl
N 27 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), FARTING, M/f
Alma enjoys a uniquely fun time with a Client.
three new chapters to the popular girl N
N 28 (EX 53) - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), m/f, MASTURBATION, FOOD-PLAY, INCEST
Sakura enjoys a private 'fashion' show; while Hailey, Alma and Quin enjoy making very special oven-baked treats.
N 29 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), YURI, INCEST
Even with her final days nearing, Hailey has yet to run out of special things she'd like to do...
N 30 (EX 54) - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH)
A new life awaits...
The big 30 ^_^
With Hailey's arc now over, this is likely to be the last chapter of the N series (or at least for a long time)
I must say, I enjoyed doing this new 'season' and thanks to those who read this series and those that have commented
Brand new fic!
a Kim Possible one
[LOLI (NYMPH)] [PEE] [SCAT] [VIOLENCE]
Dr. Drakken's latest idea to rule the world may just end up not only being Kim Possible's downfall, but also Shego's...
http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=448&warning=3&action=viewstory
completed another fic, this time a request from the challenge section,
'Pushing and Sitting' from mann
I've answered that challenge with a Lucky Star fic titled 'Pushing and Sitting', with the unfortunate 'victim' being Tsukasa Hiiragi.
[LOLI (NYMPH)] [SCAT]
Tsukasa has a bad, embarrassing day at school...
http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=449&warning=3&action=viewstory
Read it, liked it, reviewed it. Thanks for posting something without yuri or masturbation.
Two New chapters added to The Popular Girl N
N 31 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), POSSIBLE DISTURBING IMAGERY
Curiosity killed the cat...
N 32 - (ANIME) LOLI (CLASSIC & NYMPH), YURI, ORGY, TENTACLE
As the season changes to winter, there are plenty of activities that one can do to warm the body, some more fun and pleasurable than others...
also, I'd like to know, is anyone actually reading this series? I know this is a pee and scat-centric fic site and this series doesn't have much of that (only one chapter that actually focus' on it), but the story has over 400 views and only one review, so, if I'm wasting my time updating it when i do new chapters, please tell me
Yes, you're wasting your time writing this series and posting it. You should go back to a Kim Starr/Becky Starr FD fanfic like you used to. :P
No, but seriously, no one really likes to review things. People are just that damn lazy. I uploaded a fic in at least two formats (.pdf and .doc) just because someone said they couldn't open .docs and I *still* got no reviews... whereas people who just type their fics into the posts... man, they get lots and lots of reviews... And it only takes a moment to click on an uploaded file to open it... Geez... lazy bums... <_<;
Quote from: Anime Lover on July 17, 2010, 01:24:49 PMalso, I'd like to know, is anyone actually reading this series? I know this is a pee and scat-centric fic site and this series doesn't have much of that (only one chapter that actually focus' on it), but the story has over 400 views and only one review, so, if I'm wasting my time updating it when i do new chapters, please tell me
I can't speak for anyone else, but I just couldn't get into "The Popular Girl" or its spinoffs, and eventually stopped reading the chapters.
I'll admit I haven't much interest unless there's an egg laying part, or something involving the bathroom. I think it maybe also be that an epic about fetish and lolis isn't my cup of tea. I'd love for a long series with plenty of toilet scenes and other fetish stuff, but for it to be the entire point just kinda makes it seem like "The fapping show", you're probably only going to come (unfortunate pun) just to get off to the subject and nothing else.
I don't think anyone likes newhalfs or futa pee desperation either 'round these parts (or even on my forum outside of Serika). :'(
And that's why I don't think anyone likes my recent works... Because it's not straight up females in desperation sequences.
and you comment relates to what I asked, how exactly?
Quote from: OrpheumZero on July 20, 2010, 09:59:05 PM
I'd love for a long series with plenty of toilet scenes and other fetish stuff, but for it to be the entire point just kinda makes it seem like "The fapping show", you're probably only going to come (unfortunate pun) just to get off to the subject and nothing else.
It could be neat if an epic had a bathroom-related secondary plot and a "real" main plot. Like, something with a romance plot where a chick has amnesia and all her potty training is now deleted from her brain, so she's gradually potty re-trained by her lover as the story goes on. Or a fantasy epic where one of the characters poops precious materials, resulting in various chapters dealing with desperation, defecation, constipation, laxative poisoning, voyeurism, kidnapping, and so forth.
Quote from: Anime Lover on July 21, 2010, 12:26:17 PM
and you comment relates to what I asked, how exactly?
It was a response to Orpheum, sorry... not you...
I've liked your stuff, Fallen. Sure, I am more into pooping girls, but I do appreciate a good pissing one.
I meant my recent works that always seem to involve girls with penises instead of regular/traditional girls, Orpheum :P
well, there's no reason to continue posting chapters to a story that no ones interested in, so i'll stop updating it unless someone wants to read more.
Just one less site I have to go to when updating with the newest chapter
Don't read this as meaning I'm not interested in any of your writing. I greatly enjoyed "Converting Yumi," "A Gamer's Dedication," "Waste Management," and "Pushing and Sitting," and there are others that I'm also into. But not "The Popular Girl."
oh course, This is a pee/poop-centric site, I was just commenting on my popular girl series.
I knew it wasn't going to be as popular as the pee/poop stories, so it's not like I'm upset about the lack of interest in it, it's understandable.
besides, I post the series on various other sites.
I'd just like to point out that I'd read any of AL's fics that aren't pee and poop if they used characters of his that I actually liked or original characters that had some of the things I used to like that I thought I saw about his others. :P
What other sites do you post on? Or is that a secret.
well I post it on Flatchan, gurochan, 99chan, Palcomix, google docs and LAH (Little Angels Hentai)
12 chapter posted to my Popular Girl N series
This batch upload comes because chapter N 45 i'm working on is primarily a watersport chapter and I wanted to post it here
N 33 - ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), SOFTCORE YURI
As the chilly days pass into the season of winter, Alma's friends are reminded of her relative 'youth'.
N 34 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), MILD WATERSPORTS, MILD FARTING, MASTURBATION, INCEST, YURI
Winter officially starts, producing various reactions from the storm...
N 35 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), STRAIGHT, TODDLERCON, YURI, INCEST
Utah goes shopping in preparation for a special event she eagerly looks forward to. Also, Yaya may be fifteen, but she has no problem having fun with her younger sibling.
N 36 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), SHOUJO-AI
Nearly all her friends; even her sister, have a special person they like or are coupled up, but what about Alma? She claims she's fine being alone...
N 37 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), YURI
Alma finds out what Katty has in store for her.
N 38 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), SHOUJO-AI
Alma introduces Katty and Crissy to her parents, embarrassment ensues.
N 39 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), YURI, ORGY, BDSM
Alma 'offically' joins the semi-secret club Katty wasn't supposed to tell her about.
N 40 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH and CLASSIC), GRAPHIC IMAGERY, DEATH, YURI, MASTURBATION, INCEST(?), EGG-LAYING, HATCHING
Alma receives not only, a painful reminder, about the Circle of Life, but also, it's amazing wonders.
N 41 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH and CLASSIC), MASTURBATION, PEE, DEFLOWERATION
Alma, Lina and Cora get to know each other a little more and later, Alma learns, that although Cora was born with natural knowledge of things, such as flying, talking, walking; there's certain pieces of knowledge the young Fairy wasn't born with...
N 42 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH and CLASSIC), YURI
After introducing Cora to her girlfriends, Alma gets an unexpected, but wonderful invitation that she never thought she'd be on the receiving end of.
N 43 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH and CLASSIC), VIOLENCE, YURI
Most times, power-leveling a friend can be simple and easy, however...
N 44 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH and CLASSIC), GRAPHIC IMAGERY, VIOLENCE, M/F
It's the final school day before winter break and a particular winter break assignment prompts Alma and her friends to think about their future.
One new chapter added to The Popular Girl N 45
N 45 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH and CLASSIC), WATERSPORTS
Alma and watersports, not a good combo apparently. Later, Alma plans a surprise for her sister with her dad's help.
5 new chapters added to my Popular Girl N series
N 46 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH and CLASSIC), YURI
Packed and ready, Alma spends the night at Katty's home before leaving to Felis and both girls learn something new about each other.
N 47 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH and CLASSIC), SHOUJO-AI, MILD WATERSPORT
After a week of looking forward to it, Alma finally leaves Merkolova to visit her girlfriends home planet, Felis and her relatives.
N 48 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH and CLASSIC), SHOUJO-AI, MILD SCAT, m/f, VORE (SOFT), MILD WATERSPORT
After a filling meal, Alma goes to the beach with Cora, Katty and Allen, a trip that Cora will have a very hard time forgetting.
N 49 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH and CLASSIC), YURI, ANAL
With her second day on Felis, Alma remembers an important task she intended to do. Her pride as a fairy gets Cora into a competition with Jinxie. Later, Lina meets her childhood crush again after three Merkolovian years.
N 50 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH and CLASSIC), YURI, LIGHT BONDAGE, FISTING, TENTACLE
Alma meets more of Katty's relatives. Later, things get a bit 'controlling' with Lina and Sakura.
One new chapter added to my Popular Girl N series
N 51 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH and CLASSIC), YURI, DIAPER-PLAY, WATERSPORTS
Alma and Katty enjoy a little role-play.
added the final two chapters of my popular girl N series
N 52 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH and CLASSIC), SHOTA, MILD VORE
Returning back to the beach after her scare, Cora discovers something at the beach she didn't quite expect to find.
N 53 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), YURI, VIOLENCE, DEFEAT SEX
A Client offers Lina a chance to work off her built-up negative stress towards her dad and Lina discovers something shocking concerning herself and Alma from Gene.
N 54 - (ANIME) LOLI, SHOTA, STRAIGHT, VIOLENCE, MUTUAL MASTURBATION, GURO(?), VORE(?)
Alma faces a problem most teenage girls dread, unexpected weight gain! Later, Cora goes on her first date?
N 55 - (ANIME) LOLI, YURI, TENTACLE, SHOTA, STRAIGHT
Alma works on losing the weight she's gained and later, Cora experiences another first with her (boy)friend, Azure.
N 56 - (ANIME) LOLI, SHOUJO-AI, SHOTA, STRAIGHT
Alma tries out the 'breathable water' Katty told her about, Cora experiences yet another first with Azure and later, Lina discusses a life-changing decision concerning Alma and herself.
N 57 - (ANIME) LOLI(NYMPH), YURI
After nearly two weeks, Alma presents Katty with her controller once again.
N 58 - (ANIME) LOLI(NYMPH), YURI
Alma returns home and discovers a life-changing decision awaits her.
N 59 - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH)
Alma and Lina confront their owners for the first time, hoping to leave with a normal life.
N 60 (Final) - (ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), YURI
A new life awaits.
Answered a challenge by packrat
The Wizard http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/modules/challenges/challenges.php?chalid=119 (http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/modules/challenges/challenges.php?chalid=119)
The Wizard, the Dress and the Dilemma
After getting a perfect dress for prom from a mysterious man, a teen girl discovers an unusual problem...
In the media you said, "I did do a story where a girl poops blocks of crystals."
What story is that? It doesn't sound familiar.
it's called 'Money making rump'
and wow, I just realized I never even posted it here! :o
well I'm going to fix that!
Do you have a copy of the picture that inspired it?
I looked, but unfortunately I can't find it, if I do, I'll post the link to it here
[smg id=1991]
yeah I remember that story. It's a good one thats for sure. be nice to see more like it lol, or just more of this one lol.
Is "The Wizard" your entry in the Magic Problems contest? I had assumed it was, but I just noticed you didn't add the Story Contest category to the fic. ???
no, it was part of a challenge request.
hmm, but would it be allowed for me to add it to the current contest too?
I don't see why not. I'd add it to the contest if I were you.
ok then, I will ^_^
answered a challenge by Jimmy O.
Hospital Humiliation- http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/modules/challenges/challenges.php?chalid=70 (http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/modules/challenges/challenges.php?chalid=70)
Street Fighter: Hospital Humiliation
After being hospitalized from a sparring match with Ryu, Sakura is further embarrassed by the regularity of her body as she recovers.
http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=512&action=viewstory (http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=512&action=viewstory)
I just finished reading it. I'll try to put together a full review sometime, but I can say right now that I found it very enjoyable. It definitely lived up to how I envisioned that challenge, except that the nurse didn't get desperate. Despite what Orpheum said, I can believe this happened after the eating contest. The load you described is truly enormous.
Well there is the fact that nothing is mentioned of the eating contest, though this could certainly fit in as either a "lost episode" or even sometime after the whole "Clogging Bandit" scenario wraps up.
Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on August 28, 2011, 03:37:55 AM
I just finished reading it. I'll try to put together a full review sometime, but I can say right now that I found it very enjoyable. It definitely lived up to how I envisioned that challenge, except that the nurse didn't get desperate. Despite what Orpheum said, I can believe this happened after the eating contest. The load you described is truly enormous.
I'm glad you liked it, in your challenge, you said not everything need to be included, and I felt that the flow of the story would be interrupted if I included the nurse being desperate.
Quote from: OrpheumZero on August 28, 2011, 12:49:07 PM
Well there is the fact that nothing is mentioned of the eating contest, though this could certainly fit in as either a "lost episode" or even sometime after the whole "Clogging Bandit" scenario wraps up.
Well I did say in my other thread that this story would be a sort of unofficial addition, so yeah, it wouldn't follow the current timeline of the series and is more of a lost episode like you say. Plus, I tend to have a bit of trouble to getting extremely exaggerated with certain things. without Sakura having a humongous butt, like I've seen in the pics about the Sakura series, plus given the fact that disproportionally large areas are unattractive to me, I can't wrap my head around having Sakura producing the toilet-killing mountains of poop, I have to have some sort of realism in place, heck, I've seen vids of girls pushing out stuff at least three inches of girth or more from thier butts
Sakura's butt isn't nearly as big in the stories as it is in the s2x pics. As for the monstrous size, they're not entirely unrealistic, at least not on the level of say Aisha (though she's not quite "human" :P). Of course, Street Fighter does allow for some stretches of realism.
And besides, you can't deny that asses look alright when they're big, at least before they get to the point that the hips are nearly double the size of the upper torso.
Quote from: OrpheumZero on August 28, 2011, 04:03:35 PM
And besides, you can't deny that asses look alright when they're big, at least before they get to the point that the hips are nearly double the size of the upper torso.
I'm not the type of person that likes big butts ( or big breasts). heck, even the 'natural' big butts black girls have I find unattractive, I much prefer slim or proportioned girls, one of the many reasons I like lolis ^_^
I thought the amount of pooping Sakura did was realistic, but it would kind of be a stretch to believe she did that much every day. It seems like she would have had to have an exceptionally huge meal, or a longer time than a day between bowel movements, to pump that much out. So, as I read it, I was thinking this happened after the eating contest, but she was acting like it was a normal-sized load for her in order to blow the nurse's mind.
Quote from: Anime Lover on August 28, 2011, 05:17:11 PM
I'm not the type of person that likes big butts ( or big breasts). heck, even the 'natural' big butts black girls have I find unattractive, I much prefer slim or proportioned girls, one of the many reasons I like lolis ^_^
You're crazy! :P There's nothing wrong with a nice bubble butt.
Quote from: Jimmy Olsen on August 28, 2011, 11:19:33 PM
I thought the amount of pooping Sakura did was realistic, but it would kind of be a stretch to believe she did that much every day. It seems like she would have had to have an exceptionally huge meal, or a longer time than a day between bowel movements, to pump that much out. So, as I read it, I was thinking this happened after the eating contest, but she was acting like it was a normal-sized load for her in order to blow the nurse's mind.
yeah, well I like to have some sort of balance between fantasy and realistic, realistically, yeah, Sakura wouldn't produce that much everyday, but this day she did ^_^
Quote from: OrpheumZero on August 29, 2011, 12:19:02 AM
Quote from: Anime Lover on August 28, 2011, 05:17:11 PM
I'm not the type of person that likes big butts ( or big breasts). heck, even the 'natural' big butts black girls have I find unattractive, I much prefer slim or proportioned girls, one of the many reasons I like lolis ^_^
You're crazy! :P There's nothing wrong with a nice bubble butt.
To me there is >_< there's nothing at all appealing to me about it.
heh, even my dad was surprised when I told him I didn't like big breasts and butts
Different strokes, different folks, etc. etc. I guess I'm lucky in that I like females of both the slender and...well endowed varieties, albeit in different ways.
Quote from: Anime Lover on August 29, 2011, 12:57:32 AM
To me there is >_< there's nothing at all appealing to me about it.
heh, even my dad was surprised when I told him I didn't like big breasts and butts
Fine, enjoy your pathetic flat pancake butts and non-existent boobies :P
Quote from: OrpheumZero on August 29, 2011, 01:52:43 PM
Quote from: Anime Lover on August 29, 2011, 12:57:32 AM
To me there is >_< there's nothing at all appealing to me about it.
heh, even my dad was surprised when I told him I didn't like big breasts and butts
Fine, enjoy your pathetic flat pancake butts and non-existent boobies :P
I will, thank you very much ^_^
Quote from: Anime Lover on August 29, 2011, 02:59:18 PM
Quote from: OrpheumZero on August 29, 2011, 01:52:43 PM
Quote from: Anime Lover on August 29, 2011, 12:57:32 AM
To me there is >_< there's nothing at all appealing to me about it.
heh, even my dad was surprised when I told him I didn't like big breasts and butts
Fine, enjoy your pathetic flat pancake butts and non-existent boobies :P
I will, thank you very much ^_^
I was being sarcastic! :P
But seriously, a healthy looking rump is better than zero tush! 8)
ORPHEUM.
We get it. Sometimes people don't like the same things you like. And that's ok.
Now why don't we all just have a big group hug or something.
I think we're losing sight of the big picture here. Whether a girl has a small bottom or a big bottom, she still uses it to poop. That's what's important. ;)
I think I would agree with AL, big butts and breasts are overrated, thats one of the reason I like lolis too.
Quote from: Duce on August 30, 2011, 02:43:43 PM
I think I would agree with AL, big butts and breasts are overrated, thats one of the reason I like lolis too.
But a butt is nothing without some shape, can't you philistines get that into your skulls? :P Boobs are fine if they're almost not there or just small. But an ass is nothing if it's even more nonexistent than Hank Hill's.
Quote from: OrpheumZero on August 30, 2011, 03:27:45 PM
Quote from: Duce on August 30, 2011, 02:43:43 PM
I think I would agree with AL, big butts and breasts are overrated, thats one of the reason I like lolis too.
But a butt is nothing without some shape, can't you philistines get that into your skulls? :P Boobs are fine if they're almost not there or just small. But an ass is nothing if it's even more nonexistent than Hank Hill's.
I said big is overrated not any thing about Hank Hill's nonexistent butt lol
anyway a small butt is better. (not a nonexistent or huge one)
Quote from: Duce on August 30, 2011, 03:48:56 PM
Quote from: OrpheumZero on August 30, 2011, 03:27:45 PM
Quote from: Duce on August 30, 2011, 02:43:43 PM
I think I would agree with AL, big butts and breasts are overrated, thats one of the reason I like lolis too.
But a butt is nothing without some shape, can't you philistines get that into your skulls? :P Boobs are fine if they're almost not there or just small. But an ass is nothing if it's even more nonexistent than Hank Hill's.
I said big is overrated not any thing about Hank Hill's nonexistent butt lol
anyway a small butt is better. (not a nonexistent or huge one)
yeah, I agree with Duce as well, it's all about proportion to me.
a girl can have a nicely shaped butt without it being unattractive, something like this pic:
[smg id=5225]
but loli butts are the best butts ^_^
[smg id=4412]
Quote from: OrpheumZero on August 29, 2011, 08:23:27 PM
Quote from: Anime Lover on August 29, 2011, 02:59:18 PM
Quote from: OrpheumZero on August 29, 2011, 01:52:43 PM
Quote from: Anime Lover on August 29, 2011, 12:57:32 AM
To me there is >_< there's nothing at all appealing to me about it.
heh, even my dad was surprised when I told him I didn't like big breasts and butts
Fine, enjoy your pathetic flat pancake butts and non-existent boobies :P
I will, thank you very much ^_^
I was being sarcastic! :P
But seriously, a healthy looking rump is better than zero tush! 8)
Orpheum: you make me laugh until I piss myself, then I clean up and pick up right where I left off. Thank you! LMFAO!
Toasty: The voice of reason as always. Although sometimes this place is as fucked up as wonderland.
Jimmy Olsen: Well at least someone here is thinking with the "correct" head lol.
And to put my own 2 cent in: Im a lover of big asses. They make the world a better place and are fun to play with. They can hide secrets, money, my car keys (this one actually happened. She didn't want me to leave lol!) and make fantastic pillows. I prefer Spanish ass but im not picky!
Bunch of butt-jawed faggots around here. [/Predator] :P
As for boobs, I like them in all sizes except bigger than the girl's head. There comes a point where they're just too damned big and I don't prefer the idea of being smothered by boobs, even though so many people think that'd be a good way to go.
I've already almost died once due to not getting air to my lungs, thanks. =D
Another challenge answered! ^_^
This time, Backseat Bursting by paragon
Backseat Bursting: Pass the Toilet
[LOLI][WATERSPORTS]
An unfortunate group of girls, desperate to pee and nowhere to go, find that their only source of relief is... 'unconventional'.
http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=519&warning=3 (http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=519&warning=3)
(http://students.oswego.org/HOF/PBROWNJR/pisite/Villians/ss1.jpg)
I'M WITH YOU ORPHEUM!
after over two years, i've done chapter 55 of my series, 'My Life as A Succubus'
A Succubus Power
[LOLI (NYMPH)] [YURI] [BITING] [FANTASY]
After a conversation with Morrigan, Suzan wonders about Lynn's progress in learning to use a particular succubus ability, which later leads to opening up old wounds...
http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=276&chapter=55 (http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=276&chapter=55)
another 20+ page epic from me, Yay 8) =D :-[ :( :'( I'm sorry >_< at least it has character development...
New fic, a watersport one!
This one is fulfilling an idea/request from another site
A Wetting Fantasy
(ANIME) LOLI (CLASSIC), WETTING, SLIGHT EXHIBITIONISM
All she wants to do is fulfill her fantasy of wetting herself in the open with no one around...but once the opportunity arrives, can she lose the people following her to see what's up?
http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=535&warning=3 (http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=535&warning=3)
Another new fic from me, watersports again
also another request from the same person
After Practice Mischief
[LOLI] [WATERSPORTS] [YURI] [TWINCEST]
Twin girls still at school after hours must find a way to relieve themselves when all the bathrooms are closed...
http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=537&warning=3 (http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=537&warning=3)
if you read it, please comment or review it, I've gained me a willing proofreader and I can say with confidence that the tenses issue I have with many or all my fics is not present with this fic ^_^
my newest fic is my 56th chapter to 'My Life As A Succubus'
A Heart-Breaking Revelation
[LOLI [RAPE] [M/g]
Lynn learns the truth about what really happened to her father and remembers a repressed memory.
http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=276&chapter=56 (http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=276&chapter=56)
it's another story-focused chapter, though not as long as he previous one.
my latest fic is the final chapter of my 'My Life as A Succubus series'
One Step at a Time
[LOLI (NYMPH)] [YURI] [FUTA]
With Lynn finally and successfully dealing with her issues about being a succubus and the event with her father, Lynn attempts to help Alex to better cope with her phobia.
http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=276&chapter=58 (http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=276&chapter=58)
Fulfilling yet another idea/request from Facestab Fred from Anime Girl Desperation, which is:
A young magician uses a water spell that backfires onto her bladder. Optionally, she has no choice but to summon a diaper to her aid.
I've decided to forgo the diaper option and expand on the main point of the request.
And guess what? It's the return of mages-in-training Mindy and Veronica from my oviposition/egg-laying fic: Inconvenience!
A Magical Inconvenience
[LOLI (NYMPH)] [WATERSPORTS]
Mindy plans to prank her friend Veronica, but things don't go as she expects...
http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=555&warning=3 (http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=555&warning=3)
after 2 years, I've done chapter 5 of My Unusual Girlfriend
check it out if you were a fan of it
http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=311 (http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=311)
Chapter 6 of My Unusual Girlfriend has been added
http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=311 (http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=311)
Chapter 7 of My Unusual Girlfriend has been added
Chapter 8 of My Unusual Girlfriend has been added
chapters 9 and 10 have been added to My Unusual Girlfriend
Chapter 11 of my unusual girlfriend has been added
Chapter 12 of my unusual girlfriend has been added
2 more chapters left ^_^
Chapter 13 of my unusual girlfriend has been added
just one more chapter!
the final chapter of My Unusual Girlfriend has been added
A Sensational Inconvenience, my newest fic and entree into story contest XXIII is done
(ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), OVIPOSITION, EGG-LAYING, YURI, WATERSPORTS
Mindy discovers a new spell, but it can only be used with two or more people...
My newest entree into my Sextra Terrestrials series!
Introducing a new race I've created, a goo race! the typical goo-girl/guy 'monster' that is popular on 4chan.
just ctrl+f 'Geelien' on this google docs (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BQfq-cNJXMu_-k7P5aXS92wln1fnu8Ex8Yku68MxtrI/edit) link to learn more about the race.
The original first chapter turned out too long at 30+ pages, so I split it into 4 parts
The Geelien's (http://nyou.animegirldesp.org/nf/viewstory.php?sid=624&warning=3)
1-1
(ANIME)LOLI, GOO-GIRL, GOO-GUY, YURI, VIOLENCE
Follow the daily life of a teen Geelien and her family lucky enough to be chosen to visit Merkolova as representatives of their race.
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1-2
(ANIME)LOLI, GOO-GIRL, YURI, MASTURBATION
After meeting her new friend again, Celine's first day on Merkolova brightens even more when she gains another friend.
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1-3
(ANIME)LOLI, GOO-GIRL, YURI, MASTURBATION, DISTENTION
The fun continues as Becky and Sammy learn more of what Celine can do.
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1-4
(ANIME)LOLI, GOO-GIRL, GOO-GUY, YURI, MASTURBATION, INCEST,MERGING/ABSORBTION, STRAIGHT SEX, FUTA
Returning home, Celine leaves one sexual environment for another as she and her mother 'mark' the teens room, before a rather unique three-some arises.
the four parts of chapter two of The Geelien's has been posted
2-1
(ANIME)LOLI, GOO-GIRL
Waking up to her first morning on Merkolova, Celine and her parents work on fully settling in...
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2-2
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, YURI, INCEST, ANAL, WATERSPORTS, URETHRAL PLAY, ABSORBTION/MELDING
After returning home, Celine and her parents officially meet and greet Becky, Sammy and their parents.
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2-3
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, YURI, ANAL, WATERSPORTS, URETHRAL PLAY, SCAT, ENVELOPING, LOTS OF CUM
The fun continues as Becky and Sammy find themselves in a sticky and filling situation.
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2-4
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, YURI, ANAL
The naughty fun continues and Celine finds out just how naughty Becky and Sammy are.
uploading a 6 year old fic that for some strange reason, I never posted here before and was actually requested here.
Classroom Desperation: A Shocking Renovation
(ANIME) LOLI (HIGH-SCHOOL), FEMALE DESPERATION (WATERSPORT/SCAT)
The classrooms have been renovated, how will one unlucky girl handle it?
and here's the source pic I got the idea from
[smg id=7995]
So.... any new ideas down the pipeline with you? I'd hope you aren't hanging up the towel just yet. One thing for our buddy Waru to wander off, given his nature, but we can't have all of our big stars just leaving us behind. :P
ah, no worries, I'm far from done writing fics, it's just, my latest work, The Geelien's, has very little pee-related stuff, and since I didn't get any reviews or comments about it when I updated this thread, I just stopped posting new chapters.
That's good to know. Hopefully you'll have other things to post as well.
Personally, I've just never been into the futa thing, so I can't really say much on stories with them, lol.
In the meantime, I've added some brand new warnings/tags. They should help better clarify some details in many current stories, and to any that come later on.
well aside from chapter 1-4 of the Geelien's, futa hasn't appeared in any of the later chapters
Saw the responses on the reviews I did, and figured I'd reply back (lol) on here.
Yes, Garnet cared about Zidane, in fact the two are in love by the game's end. Of course, I don't think there's ever been a final fantasy without some romance outside of 12 and the mmo games.
Like I said for the pooping, maybe some extra lines from the characters commenting on the poopers or something, but that's just my two-cents.
Hopefully you can insert some Al-Bhed for later.
Also, as you hinted in the story, it would be awesome to see girls like Rinoa get involved, maybe even Selphie (who could be just totally forced by the rapey Yuna and Rikku, lol). As for other girls, can't really say. Though I bet Toasty might get a kick out seeing Fran and Penelo from 12 somehow joining in. And seeing as how they are (or at least Penelo is) pantypoopers, it could make for an interesting chapter as Yuna and Rikku meet two kindred spirits who are already into such things. And considering the load Fran did in "A Viera and her bowels", she might even make Tifa jealous, lol.
Almost forgot. If you're still trying to figure out something about the evil presence you're hinting at, you could make it like a "lost-story" connected to the Dissidia games. Although I guess that might have been part of the inspiration before anyway.
Quote from: OrpheumZero on July 31, 2013, 12:48:13 PM
Yes, Garnet cared about Zidane, in fact the two are in love by the game's end. Of course, I don't think there's ever been a final fantasy without some romance outside of 12 and the mmo games.
FFI barely had characters, so it really doesn't count. From what I can remember V didn't have much romance at all, even in the epilogue. Celes and Locke might end up together in VI, but only if you bother to get Locke back in your party for the ending, and in any event their relationship is barely developed at all. I'm not familiar with the plot of II and III, but as I understand the player characters in III are almost as faceless and interchangeable as in 1, which tends to make developing a believable romance difficult. So that leaves IV, VII, VIII, IX, X, and XIII, which is right around half of the numbered main series (slightly more if you count X-2 as separate). And from what I can tell the ratio in the rest of the spinoffs is even lower: Tactics, Tactics Advance, Crystal Chronicles, Crystal Chronicles: Echoes of Time, Mystic Quest, Dirge of Cerberus, Before Crisis and Crisis Core were all mostly romance-free as far as I know. That leaves Revenant Wings and possibly Spirits Within and Advent Children if you want to count them. The rest (Tactics Advance 2 and Crystal Chronicles: Ring of Fates, as well as anything I can't think of just now) I'm not really familiar with, so I can't say with any kind of certainty. Adventure was really a Seiken game and Legends I-III were really SaGa games, so none of them count.
In conclusion, I think the only thing we can safely say about Final Fantasy as a whole is that there's a whole lot of it.
Saw the replies to my reviews.
Had a feeling you might say Garnet's not an anal virgin, though I guess that doesn't necessarily rule out the possibility for a story still involving her giving up the "brown cherry" :P
As for the yuri, it's cool. Not like I said it COULDN'T be done in the challenge. I mean, that's the job of the challenger to specify any stipulations with their fics.
And the idea of Garnet playing with herself a bit in the first chapter could work. Hell, you could tie it all to the time Zidane grabbed her butt in the game, making it that she secretly has (but denies) a thing for being touched inappropriately. Maybe even have her always think of Zidane when she's alone and in the mood.
By the way, don't forget to review my stories too. =D
Well I haven't played FF9 in years, I tend to just play through a game to the end and get rid of it and at the time of playing, I mainly just skipped through all the dialogue, so I know crap all about the story >_< and I had no clue that Zidane grabbed Garnet's butt. Oddly though, I remember Zidane called Amerant 'Red'.
For that masturbation scene I considered, Garnet would've been thinking about Zidane while she teased herself, wondering to herself what would he think about her engaging in YRP's naughty games.
It was probably best I didn't include it though, I have a tendency to keep going and going. The more I edit and add to a 'finished' fic, the more I want to add. there's a point where ya just have to stop >_<.
So unless something glaring comes up, ver. 1.1 will be the final version of the fics.
Surprised you didn't know about the butt grabbing scene, it's probably the most memorable part of the entire game.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=czfa3J6wDXo#ws (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=czfa3J6wDXo#ws)
As for further edits, nothing wrong with adding more ideas if you have, lol
Mean, if you've some cool ideas to apply, better to make use of them and not let them go to waste. :P
man, I don't remember that scene at all >_<, length of time since playing doesn't help either
just goes to show how little i cared for story back then.
mash that 'X' button! Get to the fights!
But the story was good. Much better than VIII's clusterfuck of time travel and plotholes, lol
8 had time travel? heck, i don't even know the main baddie of 8 or 9 and the main things that stick out in my memory about 8 is Selfer, Ultimacia and Rinoa gaining her powers
heh, the only reason I know more of the story of the later final fantasy's is solely because of them being voiced, except for X-2, even though I played and beat it, I watched a youtube vid of the final boss and was completely lost, the final boss it Tidus, or a ghost using his image? >_<
I might actually get the X/X-2 remaster though, X was one of my favorites, in a large part to the blitzball minigame, which I hated at first, but learn to love once I understood it and got the best players.
I was very disappointed you couldn't play it the same in X-2 though >_<
The true villain of FF8 was some witch who was from the future, but traveled back in time to give her younger self, as well as Rinoa and Edea their powers and some nonsense so that she could ensure her existence and whatnot. As I said, a clusterfuck of timetravel stuff.
FF9's boss was Kuja, Zidane's brother, though he's replaced at the last second (literally) by a creature called Necron, who apparently wanted to bring the destruction Kuja had tried to wrought.
Actually, the boss in X-2 wasn't Tidus. But Shuyin, some guy who has a connection to Tidus (though I'll leave that alone in case you want to find out in the HD collection).
Speaking of Blitzball, you should do another story like the one where Yuna has the accident. Not maybe stories with underwater pooping, lol.
Though now that I think about it, we've just about covered most of the plausible, but largely untapped scenarios for accidents. We've got my Sniper Wolf story with the surface-to-air pooping. The Ibuki story where she craps from a tree branch, and the Yuna messing underwater. Then there's "Hermione, Ginny, and Luna get splinched" by Kyrieelleison with girls having accidents while "separated" from their lower halves.
Hmm. We'll need to figure out more strange messing scenarios. =D
Hope you've got something new in the pipeline. =D
I am, the next chapter of my Geelien's story.
but I currently don't have plans for a pee/poop themed fic.
my Geelien story does have pee and poop scenes in them, but I don't think it's enough to satisfy those who come to this site soley for pee and poop themed stories, which is why I stopped posting the story here
You never know, it's always worth a try. Besides, we do need to try and expand a little beyond just peeing and pooping stuff, even if that's what most of us like. =D
Still, hope you'll do another story soon. Of course, there's always challenges if you need something some inspiration. :P
true.
did you check out the couple chapters of 'The Geelien's' that I posted?
It's a goo-girl story about a teen goo-girl and her family moving to a new planet to meet new people and have new experiences, both, good and bad.
It's part of my Sextra Terrestrials series, so if your familiar with that, familiar characters will also reappear.
Definitely. I guess the parts you updated here just haven't shown. Which is odd. But then again, the posting for new stories/chapters has been iffy for me lately, so I might have somehow missed it.
sorry, i meant the initial two chapters that I posted: 1-1, 1-2, 1-3, 1-4 and 2-1, 2-2, 2-3, 2-4.
I haven't added the other chapters yet. If there's interest in the series though, I'll certainly update the story ^_^
updated The Geelien's with chapter 3, which consists of two parts, 3-1 and 3-2.
3-1
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL
Celine faces her first day of school on Merkolova.
3-2
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, VIOLENCE
Celine continues to experience positive responses, along with gaining many friends and meeting a few famous people. Celine also encounters her first conflict.
If the site isn't being problematic, I'll be updated the series frequently until it reaches the latest chapter, maybe even one chapter a day.
Chapter 4 of 'The Geelien's has been posted, which consists of two parts, 4-1 and 4-2
4-1
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, YURI, CAT-GIRL, SCAT, OVARY STIMULATION, ORGY, ANAL, RAPE, LOTS OF CUM
A day after her positive experience at her new school, Celine does what has become normal for her, having a naughty fun time with three of her neighborhood friends.
4-2
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, YURI, CAT-GIRL, ABSORPTION, ORGY, STRAIGHT SEX, ANAL, CUNT-BOY(MAN)
After discovering their parents having their own naughty fun with Celine's parents, Becky and Sammy finally get their wish for Celine to absorb them.
Chapter 5 of 'The Geelien's has been posted, which consists of four parts, 5-1, 5-2, 5-3 and 5-4
5-1
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, SHOUJO-AI
A week into her new life on Merkolova and after the weekend to process her first day of school, Celine settles comfortably into her new life as she attends her second day of school and reluctantly gets to know her bully, Gina, a little more.
5-2
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, SHOUJO-AI
Despite Reni's opposition, Celine gives Gina a third chance and comes away quite surprised, before meeting the Geelien siblings.
5-3
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL
Celine rejoins Reni, her sister and groups of friends.
5-4
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, YURI, ORAL, EGG-LAYING
Gym class becomes Swim class, with a little more than swimming and later at home, Sammy joins Celine with a surprise.
Chapter 6 of 'The Geelien's has been posted, which consists of five parts, 6-1, 6-2, 6-3, 6-4 and 6-5
6-1
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, INCEST, YURI
With Becky still grounded, Sammy invites Celine in joining her at a friends house.
6-2
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, INCEST, YURI, EGG-LAYING, TENTACLE, GROUP SEX
Sammy doesn't get quite the rescue she was hoping for from Celine, before the Geelien joins in on the girls fun.
6-3
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, YURI, EGG-LAYING, TENTACLE, MASTURBATION
After a brief break, Celine gets the opportunity to see how two Tragelian's fertilize their eggs and share the treat that it produces.
6-4
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, INCEST, YURI, TENTACLE, OVARY STIMULATION, GROUP SEX, LOT'S OF CUM
Janice gets her turn with Celine and the Geelien has PLENTY of honey to absorb.
6-5
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, ANAL, DISTENTION, MILD SCAT
After learning an unusual fact about Tragelian's, Celine tries out an unusual way of controlling one of her friends.
Here's a little something for those that are reading 'The Geeliens'
kisekae versions of the characters! ^_^
from left to right:
Eda, Celine, Becky, Sammy, Brandi
here is the link to the pics. There are three different versions, a normal, clothed and naughty
Celine and Eda (clothed)- https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B9z2UlZRlZpFVERYdEpGcW0xNEE/edit?usp=sharing
Becky, Sammy and Brandi (clothed)- https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B9z2UlZRlZpFNDBfX1NrWVdoNmM/edit?usp=sharing
naughty- https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B9z2UlZRlZpFZDh6cVBNcndtcDQ/edit?usp=sharing
normal- https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B9z2UlZRlZpFQXdsT0hkVWlRYkE/edit?usp=sharing
I also have 3D Custom Girl versions of Celine, Eda and Sakura, which I had a blast with since Sakura in the series was a model and 3DCG has a model mode and I took all kinds of pics of her ^_^
here's two of Celine
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B9z2UlZRlZpFWHJHYi1jeHVCX3M/edit?usp=sharing
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B9z2UlZRlZpFRDgtbnlXZFllUWc/edit?usp=sharing
one of Eda
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B9z2UlZRlZpFUVBlTTRSXzdWNUE/edit?usp=sharing
and here's just two of many of my Sakura pics
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B9z2UlZRlZpFQVhCelptR1pTdEk/edit?usp=sharing
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B9z2UlZRlZpFZFF4Rl9Ia0lybzg/edit?usp=sharing
Chapter 7 of 'The Geelien's has been posted, which consists of four parts,7-1, 7-2, 7-3, 7-4
one chapter away from being up to date ^_^
7-1
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, YURI, DEFICATION, MASTURBATION
Celine gets some very unexpected attention at school.
7-2
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL/GUY, ABSORBTION, YURI, ROLE-PLAYING
Celine and her parents play with Sammy and Becky.
7-3
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL/GUY, YURI, ABSORPTION
With Sakura visiting, it isn't long before Celine finds herself embarrassed by her mothers actions as they introduce themselves.
-4
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL/GUY, YURI, ABSORBTION, STRAIGHT SEX, ORAL, BONDAGE, DISTENSTION
Sakura has the treat of seeing Becky and Sammy being absorbed, before turning her attention to Celine's father, Avery.
At last! the final, current chapter of 'The Geelien's', Chapter 8, has been uploaded and comes in four parts, 8-1, 8-2, 8-3, 8-4.
I'm currently in the 'planned' final parts of Chapter 9, so there shouldn't be too much of a wait left on a brand new chapter, hopefully.
8-1
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL/GUY, VIOLENCE
The day Celine eagerly waited for is here, Sakura's shakra match! However, while happily attending her very first live IPSL event, Celine comes face to face with a very negative experience that threatens to destroy all the positives she's had.
8-2
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL/GUY, VIOLENCE
After a small encounter with the unfriendly girl next to her, Celine happily watches Sakura's anticipated fight, will she win?
8-3
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL/GUY, MILD YURI, MILD INCEST
After coming home, still very excited from her very first live Shakra event, Celine shares her experience with a friend, before Sakura visits again.
8-4
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL/GUY, MILD YURI
Sakura and Celine's parents meet and quickly become friends, before Celine gets an unexpected invitation.
Chapter 9 is done! It comes in 4 parts, I've finished proofreading the first two parts, so I'll post them instead of delaying until all four parts are ready.
9-1
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, YURI, ANAL
After waking up to a mystery, Celine spends her brief time in bed with a talkative and horny Reni.
9-2
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, YURI, URINATION, DEFICATION
Celine and Sakura share their morning routine with each other, before the two are joined by Reni.
Last two parts of the chapter ^_^
9-3
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, YURI, ORAL
The shower turns to much more than cleaning as Sakura grants a request by Celine, before the Geelien joins the sister's parents for breakfast.
9-4
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL
Celine joins Reni and Sakura shopping, where the Geelien has an unexpected experience that boosts her confidence.
New Fic!
based on:
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A Milky Convenience
(ANIME) LOLI (NYMPH), WATERSPORTS, SLIGHT YURI, MASTURBATION
While at the library, Veronica finds an intriguing book of spells, which leads to a rare reversal between Veronica and Mindy.
Thanks goes to Nia and paragon at Nyou Fiction for offering some of their spell ideas. ^_^
Read and reviewed the story. Nice job. Now I'm more eager to think of perverted ocarina songs.
Chapter 10 of 'The Geelien's' is done ^_^
This one comes in 4 parts and the first two parts, IMO are pretty important for Celine. I was debating with myself which way to take the first half of the chapter and I'm pretty happy with the way it turned out.
10-1
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL
Rumors and gossip travel fast, much to Celine's embarrassment and frustration.
10-2
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, MILD VIOLENCE
In Gym class, Celine sees a slightly different side of Sakura than she's used to, before a mindset Celine has held, changes.
10-3
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, YURI, MILD VIOLENCE, RAPE, CAT-GIRL
Celine discovers a surprising piece of information about Becky and Sammy, which leads to a violent encounter.
10-4
(ANIME) LOLI, GOO-GIRL, YURI, CAT-GIRL, TENTACLE, OVARY STIMULATION
Tammy demands that Celine must prove herself to her, but the Felene discovers she may have bitten off more than she can chew.
If you're looking for more ideas for that Final Fantasy crossover thing, I've got a few.
One, you could find a way to include Eiko from FF9, possibly to tease Garnet or try (though failing) to outdo in the contests. Meanwhile, Rinoa and Quistis from FF8 could show up to join Selphie. Selphie could bite the bullet and join in, Quitis could show an aptitude for the whole thing, while Rinoa could blow both away by revealing she's naturally big pooper. And though I'm not too familiar with the character myself, maybe Celes from FF6, in reference to that pic by LivingInfinite. She could reveal having had the messing fetish for ages, unlike most of the girls who only recently discovered it.
those are some nice ideas, though any character later than FF7, I can't use cause I haven't played those games, actually, I did play one, but hardly remember it, though I remember one of the characters revealed themselves as a girl a little ways into the game.
I dunno when I'll get around to doing more pee/scat fics, I've currently been pre-occupied with a Tinker Bell series of fics that turned into an unexpected trilogy, then I have two chapters of The Geelien's than I have planned to do.
Don't see why you can't at least use the 8 and 9 girls, since you've already used a few of them. Though I can get not knowing what to do with the ones from 12, especially since Toasty pretty much has them covered very well.
And 13 is just.... bleh. Some of the girls look alright, but good god if the director wasn't just abusing his precious main character like someone with a fanfic.
sorry, when I said later than FF7, I meant FF6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Should've used 'earlier' sorry for the mix-up
How the hell do you get "later" out of games that came out earlier? O_o;
That being said, dude, you should definitely play at least 4 and 6 as they are the best games, IMHO, out of the whole series. I'd write some stuff for Rydia and Celes but I don't much like poop and my office program looks like crap to me... =/
Quote from: Anime Lover on January 14, 2014, 05:17:49 AM
sorry, when I said later than FF7, I meant FF6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Should've used 'earlier' sorry for the mix-up
I figured that was what you meant. >_>
Quote from: FallenStar on January 14, 2014, 04:31:06 PM
How the hell do you get "later" out of games that came out earlier? O_o;
That being said, dude, you should definitely play at least 4 and 6 as they are the best games, IMHO, out of the whole series. I'd write some stuff for Rydia and Celes but I don't much like poop and my office program looks like crap to me... =/
You could still do it with just pee. Though I do still find it funny how you don't at least like tame pooping, like a cute girl just sitting on the potty. :P To each their own, of course.
Funnily enough, toilets have never really held much appeal to me. I guess you could say (and I'm sure AL would agree) that I'm mostly into the forced desperation caused by one girl "playing" with another. :P
heh, yeah, you like a niche scenario within a niche fetish
I tried to get you to branch out, without much success though.
IIRC though, you did gain a liking for squirting, although even with that, you developed one niche scenario with it you liked which I was unwilling/unable to RP
Funny thing is, with others, that niche doesn't seem so niche; I RP with someone now that often thinks I have too many... I guess you could say "variations"... on that theme... Of course, nowadays, I tend to like newhalves, things like cum bladders and I've tried to branch into light tentacles and whatnot...
I could never really understand the idea of 'cum bladders', Well, I get that you'd want an actual organ that produces cum so you don't have to worry about the 'squirting is piss' debate, at least, that's the only reason I could think of creating such an organ. But to me though, I just go with the idea that in hentai, it's commonplace for men and woman to too be fire-hydrants without much thought.
Although, if you wanna go into technical details, you could also say I'm guilty of the 'cum bladder' idea with my Tragelian race i've created in my Sextra Terrestrials series, the Ovaries of a Tragelian functions similar to your cum bladders if my memory of their function is correct, they are the primary source of a Tragelian's honey (pussy juice) and can even go into overdrive, creating massive amounts over short and prolonged periods of time.
I dunno... maybe if it was presented in a different way, I would've been more receptive to to your cum bladders O_o
I don't think anyone's really been a fan of my girls' cum bladders... but the overall idea was to lengthen a girl/newhalf's orgasm, make them "wet their pants" as much as they would if they'd lost bladder control and have an organ that they could control (as much as their bladders, anyway) with certain muscles - which I've come to call the kegels after the Kegel exercises.
I try not to overload the two RPs I do with cum bladder girls/newhalfs but I've often used to it to sort of explain where the vast amounts of cum comes from with so-called "cum geysers" like Cythera and whatnot. Maybe I'm just a little bit too medically minded or something, lol
hey guys, I'm not dead! ^_^
after a brief chat with OrpheumZero, I've decided to resume posting my stories here.
I've been away for a while and my Geelien series has has a ton of new content which I've finished updating to the most current chapter.
going from chapter 10 all the way to chapter 19, so if your were a fan of Celine and her time on Merkolova, you have a lot of content to catch up on ^_^
I've also done a series of Tinkerbell stories that I'll be posting after a suggestion thread, only one chapter of it has pee-related content though.
I've also done a short Frozen series, but given it doesn't have much 'weird' content, I dunno if I'll post it
Well I finished posting my Tinkerbell series.
If your only interested in site-relavent content, the the first chapter of Teaching Peri is what you want to read as the second half of it has pee and wetting content, the next chapter has some as well, along with the next story after, but it's just a couple much shorter scenes.
anyway, I posted the series in chronological order, but if your interested in the order they were made then it goes as such:
1. Teaching Tink 1,2,3
2. Tinkering Tink
3. Where Fairies (Also) Come From
4. The Binds of Sisters
5. Teaching Peri 1,2